how to go from here?

[chloedeboncourt]

Dear all,

I just submitted my second story http://www.literotica.com/s/shopping-for-men

It is about a supermarket turned into something more sexy. I like the initial thought, but I am not sure where to go. from here.

Going down the avenue of more extreme loyalty perks? Make it voyeur with shows and live acts or buffets?
Making it a story about how the business is a success and how it changes the neighborhood?

Something completely else?

All your feedback would be much appreciated!
Chloe

 

[shutterpsb]

I haven't read your story yet, but you may get constructive feedback if you post in the Author's Hangout. Personally I've only had two stories published and one pending, but I try to write a complete story. Ask yourself if you need to add to the existing story. If you don't move onto the next idea you've got.

 

[sr71plt]

This is the Feedback forum. If the OP posts it to the AH, what's most likely is that the suggestion will come to post it here instead, which will lead the OP to do some headscratching.