how to describe 'riding a cock'

[Gutterslut]

When people read my stories, they often say I have a really good style of making my story come to life, and seem very realistic. (probably because all i write is about things that HAVE happened)

anyways. I have a little trouble with trying to describe what its like riding a guy. I have done it a lot, and really enjoy it, I just have the hardest time trying to put it to words.

Anyone have any suggestions for me?

Any help will be grateful, because Im always looking for ways to improve.

<3 your gutter slut.

 

[BlackSnake]

How about tryng to use your mind's eye. Visualize the scene and write what you see....each movement. Write where his hands move, the expression on his face, the irregular sounds of his breathing, the tightening of his stomach muscles, and what she sees, hear, taste, and feel also.

 

[Gutterslut]

How about tryng to use your mind's eye. Visualize the scene and write what you see....each movement. Write where his hands move, the expression on his face, the irregular sounds of his breathing, the tightening of his stomach muscles, and what she sees, hear, taste, and feel also.

thank you. that is a really good idea. I somehow never thought of it that way.

<3 whenever my newest story is posted, ill have to edit it.. thank you!

 

[SlaveMasterUK]

having never 'ridden cock' I don't have any immediate pointers. However, like most things involving writing, it's really a case of describing all the important details. Primarily we're writing to arouse, so the readers will mostly want to know what it feels like. How does 'riding cock' make your character feel? Can she feel each thrust moving inside her? Can she feel it driving her closer and closer to orgasm with each thrust? Can she feel the rising heat and growing tension inside her body?

Similarly, you might want to add some graphic description. Think about the position they're in, and describe it carefully. I usually find I have to go over my 'position' descriptions quite a few times to get it to flow right - somehow just saying where each arm and leg goes isn't quite right. Concentrate on what's important.

Think about the speed and the direction. Is the man thrusting hard and fast, or is he taking it slow? Is he plunging deep or just teasing the woman with a tiny bit of cock, making her want more? Is it the woman doing the thrusting (the description 'riding cock' implies this) - perhaps the man is lying on his back and therefore is unable to properly thrust, and the woman is 'riding' back and forth on him.

you might also want to think about where you use the phrase 'riding cock'. If you were writing a story involving dirty talk or filthy sex for the sake of sex, then it would fit right in. However if you've spent ages building up a tender romance with candles and music and a growing love between your characters, suddenly throwing something in like "and then I rode cock" might spoil the mood somewhat

Hope that helps,

ax

 

[Gutterslut]

you might also want to think about where you use the phrase 'riding cock'. If you were writing a story involving dirty talk or filthy sex for the sake of sex, then it would fit right in. However if you've spent ages building up a tender romance with candles and music and a growing love between your characters, suddenly throwing something in like "and then I rode cock" might spoil the mood somewhat

Hope that helps,

ax

That helps me out more than you know.
thank you very much.

and no, i dont write 'romantic erotica'
most of mine is just raw, ..
hehe.

<3 thanks

 

[Colleen Thomas]

The next time you have the opportunity delay your enjoyment for a minute or two and in stead of concentrating on the feelings concentrate on how you would describe them. You would think the words you used would be lost in the act, but believe it or not they come back to you and while probably not as polished as you would like they can provide a very good base to work from.

-Colly

 

[Couture]

Up-down-up-down-up-down-up-down-up-down

Squeak-squeak-squeak-squeak

Oh Gawd! Cumming!

Oh yes! Me too!

Ahhhhhh....

Argggghhhh!

Whew....

You were great um....

...Patricia

Yeah, you were great Patricia.

Thanks...you were too....

Mike

Thanks Mike that was awesome.

 

[Celtic_Heart]

I always find, what seems to work best for me is to try and remember all the ingedients of the best sex that you've ever had then try to visualise them as you write about it. The way it felt, your emotions, the scent, the touch. Just try to mingle them all together as if you are actually experiencing what you're writing.

 

[Guest]

I may sound very out of it, but what is the big deal? To me, 'riding cock' is just a way of saying I was on top when we fucked. Isn't it? Enlighten me otherwise.

Perdita


p.s. Couture, you made me grin.

 

[Carl East]

In my humble opinion describing a woman riding a cock can go two ways. First, it can be a lustful, wanton need of the woman involved or it can convey an erotic sensation. The two short tales below should demonstrate what I mean.

When I felt his cock enter my pussy for the first time I was looking down between my legs wondering if I could accomodate such a huge weapon. As I lowered myself further I gasped and felt a primeval urge to ride his cock with all the strength I could muster.

He was stretching me like I'd never been stretched before, yet he stayed quite still, allowing me to do all the work. I knew that after just a couple of minutes I was going to climax and as it approched I began to drop down more forcefully.

or

Mike sat me down on his lap at the party because all the chairs had been taken up by the time we got there. It wasn't long before I could feel the hardness of his cock sticking into my butt from within his trousers. I found myself strangely turned on by this and decided to tease him a little.

Descreetly, I placed a hand between my legs and stroked his member a couple of times. He shifted uncomfortably and gave out a moan of pleasure. The real fun began when the lights were dimmed and some of the others were necking, for Mike suddenly took that opportunity to unzip his trousers and release his throbing cock between my legs.

That one act got me so hot I unconsciously guided his thick shaft around my panties and into my now very wet pussy. For a moment I forgot about the party and concentrated on feeling every last inch of the man I love entering my body.


I hope this helps.

Carl

 

[snooper]

"riding a cock"

It's been done.

"With rings on her fingers and bells on her toes, / She will have music wherever she goes."