"How she became a whore" from China

jacklee76

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I have living in Beijing, the capital of China, for several years. In this metropolis there are dozens of 5-star hotels mostly located in the east part of the city. It is said in every such luxury hotel some young and pretty Chinese girls provide sex service to lodgers of that hotel, especially to rich foreign travellers or businessmen and overseas Chinese from HK or Tanwan who stay here temporarily.
Once I joined a party held in a 5-star hotel invested by a French company, and witnessed several fashionable ladies walking in and out the lobby. I should admit that they were really attracting, sexy and brilliant and could be among the most beautiful women I even saw. My friend told me they were high-level whores working in the hotel. A question came to my mind, how such a pure Chinese girl turned to live as a prostitute?
Here comes my story idea. Imagine a Chinese pretty girl growing up in a traditional family and being indoctrinated conservative thoughts about sex, boys and love affairs. She left her family and went for college education in a metropolis in China, either Beijing or Shanghai, at the age of 18. After four-year campus life, she still kept the status as a virgin, though she made a boyfriend who was her university schoolmate. Such love affairs are not seldom in China even nowadays. The girl was afraid of making love with her boyfriend for possible being pregnant, and they had only experienced kissing, hugging and caressing.
After graduation, she found a decent job in a subsidiary of an American company while separated her boyfriend, who went to the South of China to persue a work. She was very satisfied with her high salary job and worked hard for her American boss. So after half a year her boss, a nearly forty businessman with family in California, promoted this girl as his administration assistant and she started to work in the same office of her boss. At this moment, our nice and kind Chinese girl was still having no idea about the lascivious intention of her American boss.
But she generally came to know a bit. Every time when she was alone with her boss, he might chat on some sexual jokes or events with her. She did resist these utterances from heart but beared them as she did love this job as well. The shy girl also encountered many sexual harassments from her boss by means of touching her hands, arms, even thighs while pretending unintentional. Meanwhile, the American boss also invide her to join some cocktail parties, his friends family dinners and personal dating just between them two. He bought expensive presents for her, most of which were beautiful and sexy dresses. However, our heroine only said thanks and refused to wear them for she was too conservertive a girl to dress even a little bit sexy clothes on.
The more the pretty girl was difficult to cajole, the more the boss decided to fuck her by all means. Finally he found an opporunity. One evening when the Chinese girl got a little intoxicated at a business cocktail party, her boss persuaded her to drink one more glass of wine, in which he put some hypnotic. The he brought the girl in coma to his villadom in the suburb of the city. There the boss realized his long sexual fantasy as he undressed his secretary and eventually fucked the attracting Chinese virgin.
As we could imagine, the girl hated her boss seriously and regreted drinking too much yesterday night when she came to wake up and found she lost her cherished chasteness. Even worse, her boss threatened her to act as his secret lover with several digital photos of her nude body taken last night. Fearing her friends and parents would see the lewd pictures of her, the miserable girl gave up suing the boss and accepted his next fucking on that morning.
Once she fell into a dangerous trap, our heroine no longer had the ability to escape. Her boss twisted this formerly innocent Chinese girl 's normal life and instigated her to live a sultry and indulging life.
He made love with his adminstration assistant, now also his secret sex toy, frequently at every occasion, such as the boss's bedroom, hotel rooms, tents in beach and even their office. The boss was very interested in fucking his girl in her formal clothes. He forcefully asked her to wear the working dress without any bra or underwear, for it's convenient for him to tease and fuck the sexy girl in office. The kinky boss also invented many erotic ways to torture his living sex toy, among which a remote vibrator was used frequently. He fixed this vibrator on the bottom of a speical leather panties with locked chain and compelled the girl to wear it so he could control her status of sexual feeling since the vibrator was in her cunt all the time and the switch was in his hand.
From such licentious experiences our girl learned how men thought and how the nature of sex worked. She totally changed her mind about sex and didn't fear any fucking affairs any more. We could say she lost the former childish and conservative style entirely and now she watched and understood this world full of lust more clearly.
AT the end of my story, our heroine revenged his boss by designing a trap whick made him blackmailed and lost a big money. Then the sexy and flirtatious Chinese girl began to work in lobbies of 5-star hotels in Beijing as a high-level prostitute. When her former lover in campus happened to appear in a lobby where she was bargaining with a Japanese man, he couldn't believe himself seeing a whore looking so like his former girlfriend.

The above is a rough framwork of the new story. From my angle, sex is not only making love, but also reflects social relationship behind it. As I enjoyed many sexual fantasies written in stories here, I also focus on the cutural backgrounds as hints in them. For example, personal sexual fantasy differs depending on social classification, education backgrounds, and many other variations. A succuessful writer should grasp the psychoanalytic reasons of his or her readers' sexual dreams.
What do you think of the interpersonal relationship behind my above story? Do you like the framework or not? Do you prefer to mend it or put other plots in it? I'd like to wait for your kindly feedbacks. Thank you.
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Jacklee

Apr, 26 03


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Ah, blackmailed into prostituting herself. That idea isn't new but your take on it is something I have yet to read in a story.

I like it. I tend to like stories that veer into the realm of semi-consensuality and this one certainly touches upon that in many ways.

You've also given yourself a lot of room to explore different kinks. I like kink ;)

I haven't got anything to add to this right now. I'll post if something comes to me.

-s. (Chinese girl living in the USA)
 
thanks

violent intimacy said:
Ah, blackmailed into prostituting herself. That idea isn't new but your take on it is something I have yet to read in a story.

I like it. I tend to like stories that veer into the realm of semi-consensuality and this one certainly touches upon that in many ways.

You've also given yourself a lot of room to explore different kinks. I like kink ;)

I haven't got anything to add to this right now. I'll post if something comes to me.

-s. (Chinese girl living in the USA)

thank you for giving me some comments about my idea.
Yes, the main framework isn't new but we may fulfill it with concrete erotic details, which I really need your suggestions.
May I ask what the meaning of "consensuality" is? I do make sense about this word but are not quite clear for there is no such a word in my English dictionary.
Yes, I want to show many sorts of kinks in this story, including many members' fetishes. And what's your favorite one?
By the way, are you really a Chinese girl in U.S. ?
 
Sorry. Try looking up "consensual" and "consent" instead. (I really need to stop making up words for my own use!)

What I should have said was that I like stories where perhaps one of the participants is not 100% willing. In your idea, the girl is forced into doing this when her boss threatens her with the photos. So she's not really willing but has to go along with it. I like stories like that.

My favorite kinks include anal sex, spankings, sadomascochism, pet play (where one person assumes the role of an animal like a dog or cat), watersports (pee play).

Yes, I'm really a Chinese girl in the US. Why would I tell you I was if I wasn't? :) I moved to the US from Hong Kong.
 
about details of this story

Thank you for your answer to my question.
Yes , as you, I do love nonconsent erotic stories. When knowing that the sexy girl was forced to do sexual affairs unwillingly, I can feel a kind my strength of domination and control, especially for kinky and humiliating ones, such as public sex or exposure.
In my story, I want the boss to abuse our heroine seriously. Not only should he take her as a sex toy, but also compel her to sever his clinets and colleagues. The girl might also be a fashion model for all sorts of kinky and extremely sexy bras, panties, and dresses.
We can design a concrete scene in my story that in a public occasion the boss made his girl nealy orgasm, but the enviroment didn't permit her to do so. The poor girl inhibited her cumming for long time and suffered a lot.
How do you feel such ideas? I need your comments.
 
I thought your outline was good. If you write the story I am sure many of us would be willing to help with the editing, to overcome some of the language problems. I appreciate that the grammar of English is very different from the various Chinese dialects, so some help may be needed.

What would be much more difficult is for someone who has not lived in China to write it for you. I could certainly write the story, but all the little details would reflect Western culture, rather than Chinese. I'll offer just one example, from the little contact I have had with the Chinese community in HK. When a young man or woman marries in the West, they hope to set up home in their own little house, and expect that their children will also leave home in their turn. The only Chinese family to whose home I was invited had five generations living under one roof, and thought it unnatural that Westerners did not do the same.

It is for this sort of reason that it is difficult to put a story convincingly in a (real) setting the author doesn't know. Many authors spend months researching their settings.
 
thank u for yr feedback

First thanks a lot for your feedbacks, both criticism and praise.
I do have some problems of my English grammer, partly because lack of training of English writing and partly because the rigid grammer education given in mainland China. You may find hints of Chinese grammer rules in my English eassys if you knew Chinese. The reason why some Chinese can speak and write native English can be traced to their Europeanlized Chinese. Anyway I should correct it as possible as I can.

Surely no one without Chinese living experience could work out my story as you mentioned, "It is for this sort of reason that it is difficult to put a story convincingly in a (real) setting the author doesn't know. Many authors spend months researching their settings." That's one reason I tried to find one author from East Asian Countries.

If time permits, I'd like to fulfill the outline of my story by myself, since a long vacation is waiting for me ahead. But how long do you think it's enough for this story? And what details should I add into it?

Thank you :)
 
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Fortunately, I've found an author who wants to fulfill my story idea. Now we are discussing some details of the coming novel. You may share some of my suggestions.
"I agree with you that our novel should focus on two dimensions. One is 'sex is not only sex', while the other is 'sex is sex'. Let me explain.
"Sex is not only sex, that is to say, sex is a kind of human relationship through the lens of social science analysis, from sociology, economics and even politics. Well I don't want to make it complicated. See the case in our story. The relationship between the hero and heroine, an American male middle-age rich boss and a Chinese female young and relative poor employee, may reflect at least the following pairs of concepts. In culture, occidental/oriental; in nation, U.S./China; in economy, rich/poor, center/periphery; in politics, hegemony/submission; and basically, in sex, male/female. That is why this outline absorbs my attention and runs in my mind for a long time. It conceals many kinds of social integrations and conflicts in one story.
"On the other side, sex is sex, which means sex is pure happiness and extreme pleasure. We should describe every scene in the novel as erotic as possible and thus arouse our reader even to orgasm. I trust your literary talent to fulfill them. In the outline I put some plots in it, which traced to my kinky fantasies. "
At the same time, if anyone loves to join our discussion, don't hesitate give us some feedbacks via PM or email or posting here. Thank you.
 
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jacklee76 said:
do you like to join us or show us your feedbacks?
Too busy to join you. The "day job" got snagged round the Arab business and ...
 
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