How do you show a mother becoming suspicious about her son having incestous feelings for her without making it obvuous?

[SS100]

As in not something that immediately shows sexual interest but something that slowly, over the course of several weeks tips her off.

The reason why is because I'm think about , maybe, writing a story where a South Asian / Desi mother and son engage in sexual relations. Now I want to have a slow build up I.e. at least two to three thousand words.

As the two are living in Canada, and the son was born there, I want to show that he's lasting after his mom but isn't too brazen about it. His mom, however being his mom, figures it out in three or four weeks. The dad is still in the picture but the parents have a dead bedroom. And the daughter is still living at home.

However I want the relationship and the build up to it be done relatively secretly. Both kids are studying at university and the parents work.

Just wanted to give context and was fishing for ideas.

 

[LupusDei]

What's the point of view?

Is it the son fighting his desires and losing, while suspicious mom will notice, afraid of the inevitable, still, by string of errors that may not be entirely erroneous hasten the revelation?

Is it mother noticing changes in her son's demeanor and dig in, first to exclude the worst of fears: drugs, gang, gambling, sect... weird girlfriend, etc. to eventually be almost relieved it's just a perverse sexual desire, and that she's the target and thus very much in control still?

Is it impartial drifting third person openly stating the facts almost beforehand illustrating them with action sequences as seen from a fly on the wall, but rarely if ever delving in the thought process and motivation of the actors explicitly?

While the actual events may be all the same, the presentation and relative importance may differ greatly.

 

[FantasySharer1]

The best is for him to steal her dirty panties and her figuring it out over time. It would finally culminate in her finding a pair with his cum all over it, hidden in his hamper. She'd slowly start being more and more open about leaving out her dirty pairs.

She'd finally ask for a massage and things would escalate when he realizes she's wearing the same pair that he came in an hour ago. And his cum is still in it.

 

[LupusDei]

I would say, the first stage will be... perhaps somewhat exact opposite of what naive trope may expect: the son will avoid his mother, get irritable in her presence and cut previous rituals and routines developed in their previous relationship.

He will mostly not notice and even actively deny that happening when called out on it, and get confused (potentially aggressive) when confronted by cold facts he's unable to explain away on the fly.

That phase overcome will continue with new relationship building as if they were strangers trapped in the same house. Discovery, questions and conversation on new, never before included themes. No, not necessarily sexual, even likely most wouldn't be, and those that dance close to, not explicitly so.

 

[LupusDei]

The best is for him to steal her dirty panties and her figuring it out over time. It would finally culminate in her finding a pair with his cum all over it, hidden in his hamper. She'd slowly start being more and more open about leaving out her dirty pairs.

She'd finally ask for a massage and things would escalate when he realizes she's wearing the same pair that he came in an hour ago. And his cum is still in it.

That's already on finish spurt after the last bend.

And what happens there will depend on what the son's sexual kinks are and how good his opsec is.

Stealing clothes for surrogate intimacy is certainly a possibility, but just as well it may be a nightie, worn by himself or stuffed on a pillow.

Or, she may find his sketch album, with images ranging from romantic to disturbing...

 

[SS100]

That's already on finish spurt after the last bend.

And what happens there will depend on what the son's sexual kinks are and how good his opsec is.

Stealing clothes for surrogate intimacy is certainly a possibility, but just as well it may be a nightie, worn by himself or stuffed on a pillow.

Or, she may find his sketch album, with images ranging from romantic to disturbing...

I would say the son has typical kinks like anal, handjob, blowjob and etc. Facesitting and titjobs. But he also wants to breed his mother.

I also want to say he's somewhat sneaky. If no one is specifically looking for something he can take it and people don't realiz he took it.

So I'm open to ideas other than Cummings on undergarments.

 

[LupusDei]

A kinky opinion would be to orchestrate wardrobe malfunctions by strategically damaging mom's clothing.

 

[FantasySharer1]

I would say the son has typical kinks like anal, handjob, blowjob and etc. Facesitting and titjobs. But he also wants to breed his mother.

I also want to say he's somewhat sneaky. If no one is specifically looking for something he can take it and people don't realiz he took it.

So I'm open to ideas other than Cummings on undergarments.

The breeding is a great idea
You can keep the mom young like 36 and make the son 18. She wants another kid but he finds out dad has become infertile. Part of the progression of the relationship involves him convincing her to make the baby with him. A slow estrangement from husband/dad parallels a strong sexual and romantic relationship with ownership tones with son over mom. Once he impregnates her he begins to really take control.