How cliche can you get and still be original?

WickedEve

save an apple, eat eve
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originally cliché poem

Lust shoveled in a bucket
and toted over yonder
to Ernest McGee.

Farmer and Hoe in the barn,
both blazing.
I pitched the contents on their fire
but passion leapt higher.

The loft ignited.
Sparks fell into the hay,
injured.

I soothed all three
with lust from the bottom of the bucket.


(Okay, no laughing at my poem)
 
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