How about a finale?

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I've got a location and characters, and they are in a swinging situation. MCs are a young man and older woman. (Obviously, it's me!) She used to swing with her ex, and she wants do continue with her new young boyfriend. They have some great times together and the cast includes three more couples. I'm ready to wrap it up and could use help fleshing out the finale. Obviously, it will be some serious group sex.
I'm looking for a fun location and occasion. Something out of the ordinary. It takes place on the EC of Florida in Melbourne. I'm thinking it's also the FMC's birthday and she is the center of attention. I'm just stuck on the where and how. There has been plenty of house jumping so far and I need something different. A sex club maybe. There was once one there called the Twisted Pineapple, but it seems to be closed.
Any cool ideas? I'm all eyes. If I use your idea, I will credit you in the author's notes.
 
Well, I have a story or two where I used the Hedonism Club in Jamaica. Since they are in Florida, its not too far away.

They could take a quick jaunt down there for her birthday. They have events. I've done some research for my stories.

https://hedonism.com/groups/

Plus, you could take something from their activities and get creative. I had my characters go nude snorkeling.

https://hedonism.com/experience/

They could go and take a Kama Sutra class together.
https://hedonism.com/amenities/wellness/kama-sutra/
 
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Gambling cruise? They go out into international waters, so legalities become less of a problem. The MCs finish (pun intended) on stage?
 
"We should go to the Twisted Pineapple!"

"It's permanently closed these days."

"Oh that's sad to hear," she said with disappointment. Then lightened up. "We should break in there. See it one last time. Snoop around the building and see the erotic stuff left behind!"

Inside much is old and dusty, but relatively well preserved. The old stage and the curtains. The long bar still had some bottles and glasses hiding in the cabinets. Several rooms were sealed so tight that they barely had any dust at all. The lights were just a breaker switch away.
 
"We should go to the Twisted Pineapple!"

"It's permanently closed these days."

"Oh that's sad to hear," she said with disappointment. Then lightened up. "We should break in there. See it one last time. Snoop around the building and see the erotic stuff left behind!"

Inside much is old and dusty, but relatively well preserved. The old stage and the curtains. The long bar still had some bottles and glasses hiding in the cabinets. Several rooms were sealed so tight that they barely had any dust at all. The lights were just a breaker switch away.
Maybe they decide to buy it and reopen it… leading to a “spin off” series.
 
I've got a location and characters, and they are in a swinging situation. MCs are a young man and older woman. (Obviously, it's me!) She used to swing with her ex, and she wants do continue with her new young boyfriend. They have some great times together and the cast includes three more couples. I'm ready to wrap it up and could use help fleshing out the finale. Obviously, it will be some serious group sex.
I'm looking for a fun location and occasion. Something out of the ordinary. It takes place on the EC of Florida in Melbourne. I'm thinking it's also the FMC's birthday and she is the center of attention. I'm just stuck on the where and how. There has been plenty of house jumping so far and I need something different. A sex club maybe. There was once one there called the Twisted Pineapple, but it seems to be closed.
Any cool ideas? I'm all eyes. If I use your idea, I will credit you in the author's notes.
Well depends on what you want the focus to be: do you want it to be on the characters and the bond they’ve made In their swinging group, or do you want it to be a big blow out with more characters and more wild stuff (more couples).

Cause for the latter, sex club or resort.

For the former, if you want them to do kind of a once in a life time thing:

Reasonable, intimate, still allows for group sex and wild stuff

1. Party boat or yacht someone rents


Once in a lifetime, fuck being reasonable:

You got Kennedy Space center, they have those flights that simulate zero gravity. They get tipped off about a program where they train the pilots how to do the flight and if your group can drop the cash and don’t mind the crew joining in, they can fuck in zero g (mind you, they should probably start fucking throughout the flight but your swingers will have parts where they are airborne while fucking
 
You got Kennedy Space center, they have those flights that simulate zero gravity. They get tipped off about a program where they train the pilots how to do the flight and if your group can drop the cash and don’t mind the crew joining in, they can fuck in zero g (mind you, they should probably start fucking throughout the flight but your swingers will have parts where they are airborne while fucking
The amount of people bouncing off each other as they try to fuck makes this just the funniest image in my head. It's so, so hard to fuck in zero-G/minimal-G environments. They think it'll be fun, but it's just non-stop newtonian action-reaction nonsense. They all go home blue-balled, then just have a massive fuckfest to get over it.
 
I like the idea of the group taking a sex cruise, perhaps it being six days in length. But they want to do it right, so they devise a competition between the four couples to see which couple can the the most "full swings" (both husband and wife must engage fully with the other couple in order for it to count) the first five days of the cruise. The winning couple are known as the "King and Queen of Swing" and the other three couples must submit to them on the last day of the cruise.

If nothing else, there could be a tremendous amount of sex that needs to be written, and demanding readers would want to know it all.
 
There's a swinger's club in Hollywood FLA that would make a nice setting for a sex romp. It's called The Rooftop. Basically because the roof is a big clothing-optional pool and party venue.

The second floor is one big ballroom, with little themed sex rooms all around the perimeter, all with large windows so people in the main room can watch the shenanigans inside the little rooms. It's kinda freaky.
 
So I see a lot of suggestions for the 'where', but not for the 'how'. So for the how, why not make it an engagement?
The young BF is going to propose and of cours created the most magnificent setting for it. Besides the known swinger couples he contacted some of his own acquintences and low and behold, 2 friends are actually up to bring their GF's along for a good swinger engagement party. So 2 more young couples are added into the mix.

After he proposes and she says yes, the women take her to get changed into a wedding dress themed stripper dress. When she walks in, all the spotlights on her, all the men only have a bow tie around their neck and besides that they are all naked and ready. As she walks into the room wedding music plays, but not for the wedding just yet... The men all focus on her before eventually the other women join in. Of course she ends up covered in cum well fucked, the dress ripped and barely clinging to her body as her privates are exposed as lays in the arms of her young Fiancé.
 
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