Hotel Hell

TheDeathClown

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Sheets of rain slashed against the windows of Ted’s old station wagon. He had been driving for over ten hours now and making good time, but the weather had brought the traffic almost to a standstill. They windshield wipers were working overtime, but were inadequate to keep up with the weather.

Ted cursed and mashed his fingers at the car radio, trying to find a good station. The only stations it was picking up had old time preachers or old time country music. He longed for a good Rolling Stones song, but it was as if this part of the country had never heard of the Stones. Cursing under his breath, he flipped the radio of with his middle finger, and then left it along. A tangy voice called out “for tryin’ and crazy for cryin’ and I’m crazy for lovin’ you”.

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He was feeling tired and frustrated. He was thirteen hours out from Chicago and still wearing the same grubby grey running suit. Ted rubbed briskly at his lanky frame, trying to warm up. The car’s heater hadn’t worked in years. He rubbed at his tousled blond hair and groaned. Ahead, someone was trying to cut right through the slow moving cars. There was an exit in a quarter mile, which they obviously were trying to get too. Ted made a quick decision, and yanked the wheel. Horns went off around him, as he also cut through a few lanes, and then started driving on the shoulder.

Exit 28 turned out to be a nothing sort of town, with little more than a gas station with a Quick Stop, the ubiquitous Wendy’s and a seedy looking motel called Knight Rest. The neon sign showed a picture of a knight in armor sleeping on a bed, with giant Zs floating upwards. With a sigh, he pulled into the lot for the motel. There were an assortment of beat-up sedans, a few SUVs and an old 1950s Ford pickup. Ted park next to the pickup.

The parking lot lights flickered on and off as he ran from his vehicle too the office. The rain hadn’t let up any. He was soaked to the bone by the time he reached the lobby. The lobby was a tiny affair with faded yellow wallpaper, metal folding chairs, travel posters from the 1970s, an empty brochure rack and a dirty Mr. Coffee. The counter was clean though and held a large book and a small metal bell. Ted sloshed his way over to the desk and hit the bell. It sent a dull clank through the lobby.


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A short, ugly little man came out from a door behind the counter. He was smoking a cigar and held a racing form in one hand. "Wanna rooms it's fifty bucks. Checkouts at eleven. Yer lucky bub. Last one." He handed Ted a red key chain and key, with the number 27.

Just then the door to the lobby blew open, letting in more rain and wind. A woman was almost blown through the door. The ugly little man spoke again. His voice was as ugly and pinched as his face was.

"Bad luck there Toots. This guy here just got my last room."
 
Elizabeth could not believe her luck, here she was only about 50 miles from the place she needed to be at and buckets of rain poured down on the car making it impossible to continue to drive. She saw a flashing light and as she got closer she could see it was a motel with t and l burnt out. On closer inspection she could see it was a seedy motel to boot. Oh well she thought to herself, beggers could not be choosers. She parked her bug as close as she could to the overhang, looked into the mirror assessing how well her makeup and withstood the damp weather, her long blond hair was the only thing that like this weather as it curled in ringlets down her back. Her big crystal blue eyes looked tired and stared back at her. Oh well there was no use to it she had to step out into the pouring rain. Her blue business suit clung to her well porportioned body as it got satuated and her small pumps stabbed the muddy unpaved parking lot of the motel. She was a mess by the time she opened the door to be greeted by a short ungly man.

"Bad luck there Toots. This guy here just got my last room."

Well what else was new she thought as she looked from one man to another. Her hand moved to the door knob.

"Are there any other motels around her?"
 
The ugly man thought for a moment. "Sure, if you go another fifty miles." He wandered back into room behind the counter.

Ted thought for a long moment. He really didn't want to go back out into the rain. Still, he was just headed toward his aunt's house. This lady was obviously dress for success and headed somewhere. She needed a good nights sleep more than she did. He walked over to her and held out his key.

"Here, just take the room. I only have another half hours to where I am going anyway. I can wait out the rain." It was more like two hours, but she didn't need to know that.
 
Elizabeth was taken back as the good looking man gave her his key to the room. She shook her head as she spoke.

"I cannot except this, but thank you anyway, I have about 50 miles to go, I think I can make it and if not, my car is very comfortable"

Her hand came up to brace his from the bottom as she placed the key back into his hand and closed his fingers over it.

"Well, it is a pleasure meeting a person like you, thanks for your concern but I will be ok"

Elizabeth turned to leave, her hand was on the door when he spoke again.
 
"Wait!" Ted realized just how scuzzy and wet he looked. She looked wet too, but at least she wasn't dressed in a running suit left over from high school. Still he had to try. It just wasn't right. "If you won't take the room, why don't you at least come and hang out until the rain stops. I would feel really bad sitting in a clean, dry room and knowing you were stuck in your car." He was sure that she would turn him down. No woman as smart and professional as she looked was going to trust strange guy in a hotel room, but he had to offer.
 
"Wait!"

Elizabeth's hand dropped off of the doorknob as she turn to look at the man. A little frown creased her forehead as she listened to him. As pleasant look came over her face as he spoke.

"You are very sweet to offer me refuse but we do not even know each other. Its really not normal to just go to a man's apartment, but thank you for your concern"

She smiled at him for a moment.

"I will be alright, really I will, I have been taking care of myself for a long time, now"
 
Ted wasn't sure what to say as he watched walk out. Taking the matter further would probably just scare her, and get him kicked in the groin, or pepper sprayed. Since neither of those things appealed to him, he shrugged and headed toward the door himself. He left it only seconds after the woman. He didn't look for her, because he immediately found himself running for his room. The rain was still coming down in unforgiving ice cold sheets.
 
Elizabeth turned the doorknob and turned to look at him once more; she smiled and hurried through the beating rain back to her car. The wind was whipping at her hair and clothing as she unlocked and opened the door. She sat down shivering as she shut the door. She reached behind her and grabbed an afghan and wrapped it around herself. She wasn't going anywhere in the rain but she at least had some shelter. She turned on the engine, then the heater trying to get warm.
 
Ted suddenly saw the woman. She was parked right outside his room and huddled in a blanket. He cursed, but couldn't let himself not do something. He ran up and tapped on her window. When she lowered it an inch, probably to tell him to get lost, he dropped his key through the slot. After doing that, Ted ran for his car, jumped in, and yanked the door shut.

Ted was soaked to the bone now. He couldn't see anything outside the windows, because the rain was so heavy. He quickly stripped his soaked clothing off, despite the difficulty of doing so in the front seat of a station wagon. He crawled over the backseat of the car, into the bed, and started going through his suitcase. He used a flannel shirt to dry himself as best he could, and pulled on a pair of underwear, a t-shirt and a pair of jeans. The jeans were difficult to get on, because he was still somewhat wet and had gained a few pounds since he bought them.
 
Elizabeth was surprised at first when she cranked down the window to see the man. When he flipped in his key to his room, her eyes widened. She watched him run to his car and get in it. The rain and steam probably from his breath in the car hid what he was doing. She chuckled then smiled as she realized she was at an impass with this man. If she didn't go to his room with him, he was too galant to let her stay in her car. She opened her door and pressed the button to lock it, checked to make sure she had her keys and grabbed her overnight bag in the back seat. She got out and ran over to his car, passenger side and tapped on it with her keys.

When he opened the door, she grabbed it and slipped in.

"Listen, it seems we are both very stubborn people. How about a compromise. I will share the room with you but just to make thinks clear, I will not share your bed, ok"

She smiled at him and streatched out her hand.

"I am Elizabeth Larchmont"
 
Ted felt like he should feel insulted, but then realized how stupid that feeling was. Part of him said that he should have just drove off immediately. He shook the woman's hand. "Ted McCallister." I'm wasn't thinking that at all. I just didn't want to.... Anyway, its a deal. He suddenly realized how stupid he had been to change into his dry clothing already. He reached back over the seat and grabbed his suitcase. It was small and had a few more articles of clothing in it. He managed to drag it over the seat, without hitting the Elizabeth in the head. "O.K., let's go!" He jumped out of the car, hauling his suitcase, and ran for the hotel room.
 
Elizabeth hurried after him, he was a fast runner, she was slower but the heals had a lot to do with it. When she got to the door he was holding it open for her. She smiled at him as he lead the way to the elevator. They stood side by side very quietly, two strangers with only one thing in common, the storm.
 
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