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"Hotel California"
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The Baker Family posed without the need for feigned smiles; once the stranger they'd wrangled to click the pic got the shot, they were heading east from the coast for home. It had been a fun vacation ... but it had been a long vacation, and each of them couldn't wait to get back home to something -- or someone -- they'd been without for almost a month.
Tim Baker had left his company in the hands of his younger brother, and while Pete was a capable man he had no imagination, and Party Time needed a man with imagination to be at the helm. Tim had been calling and texting his brother every day -- every time his wife wasn't within ear shot to remind him that they were on vacation -- and Pete had responded each time that everything was just fine. But Tim needed to get back to Pete; he needed to check on the shop personally.
Tim's wife, Camille, needed to get back to Pete, as well ... because she found him fine and needed to get personal with him as soon as possible. The two In-Laws had been carrying on -- once, twice sometimes three times a week -- for almost three years. Being without Tim's younger, more energetic, and extremely more skilled brother had left Camille so desperate for sexual release that she'd actually made love to her husband, their first time together in over a year ... and not worth her time, Camille had told herself afterwards.
Greg was having a similar love life problem. After lusting over her for six years, Greg had lost his virginity to, literally, the girl next door. Three years his senior, she'd enjoyed the night as well and promised him much more as soon as he returned from the obligatory family vacation.
And Carla, his recently turned 19 year old sister, had a similar problem ... far more similar than she would ever speak of to her family. She, too, had met a beautiful older woman, a 23 year old photography major and barista at the local Starbucks. Tara had invited Carla to her apartment to look at her photography portfolio, then convinced her that she should pose for some shots. It began innocent enough, but over the next two weeks, the clothes Carla was posing in became sexier, became less numerous, and finally became an obstacle. She posed for artistic nudes ... then posed in erotic situations, including touching herself ... and finally posed with Tara, making love as the multiple cameras on timers continued to snap away. Tara had given shy, innocent plain Carla something no boy had ever given her ... a feeling of beauty, a feeling of confidence, and a feeling of true pleasure and satisfaction.
Now, all the Baker Family wanted was to get the hell home and return to their lives. As the man behind their camera reviewed the shot in the digital camera's small screen and gave the thumbs up, the family scattered; Tim headed for the motel's porch to retrieve the last of the bags, Camille retrieved the camera, and the children headed for the car, each one of them on their phones, rapidly texting messages to their respective lovers promising to be with them by the end of the day.
The steam rolled out of the engine compartment while all four of the Bakers stood outside of the SUV, praying for a breeze to cut through the unusually high early summer heat. Tim looked to his wife and shrugged. "I had it serviced before we left and checked all of the fluids yesterday."
They'd been on the side of the road for more than an hour with no passing traffic when, of all things, a limousine came over the rise, slowing and stopping beside them. A Chauffeur emerged, donning his cap and suit jacket and, as if meeting his assigned clients, offered out his hand to Tim and said, "Hello, I'm Jake."
"Um, hello," Tim said with a tone of disbelief. He took the man's hand and asked, "How far to the nearest town?"
"Too far," Jake said, jerking a thumb over his shoulder and adding, "But there's a hotel just up that road."
All four of the Bakers followed his gesture and, for the first time, found a full color advertisement the size of a sheet of plywood for The Hotel California, with the line "Only 8 short miles to Paradise" across the bottom with an arrow pointing up the narrow, poorly maintained black top.
"I can give you a lift," Jake went on. "I'm on my way there to pick up clients, so ... it's not out of the way or anything."
The kids were already confirming their desire to accept Jake's invitation, grumbling about the heat and the need for water and more. Carla looked to her phone for the hundredth time and asked, "Is there cell coverage there?"
"I believe so," Jake said, already heading for the back of the SUV as he asked, "Do you want to take all of your bags or just specific ones?"
Tim and Camille looked to one another; their expressions told all, that they really didn't have much of a choice ... and as far as choices went, this wasn't a bad one. Tim -- fearful that anything left behind would be stolen -- looked to Jake, answering, "All of them if they'll fit."
"They will," the Chauffeur said, quickly beginning to unload the suitcases and bags. In less than two minutes, the SUV was practically empty and the limo was, instead, full of the Bakers and their stuff and heading up the narrow road.
Camille was about to ask how far they'd driven -- it had been far more than just 8 short miles -- when they began to climb a long rise and the dry, brown desert gave way to an ever thickening green forest. When they burst out the other side of the thick woods, there it was before them, The Hotel California.
The Bakers each responded with surprise and delight as the limo left the rough black top behind and moved onto the cobblestone drive, which was more elegant but still rough below the big car's tires. Jake stopped the car at the Hotel's entrance and came around to let his riders out. "Here we are sir, ma'am. I'll take care of the bags for you."
"Welcome," a deep male voice called out. The Hotel's Concierge opened the metal gates across the Lobby's entrance and emerge, extending his hand toward Tim. As Tim took his hand, the man looked to Jake and informed him, "Your clients will be down momentarily."
"Thank you, Harold," the Chauffeur replied, turning to begin unloading the bags. As he did, he looked between the other Baker Family members and then gestured toward the open gates. "Best lemonade in the state is right through there ... restaurant, at the far end of the lobby."
Before Tim could say anything, his kids were gone. Camille shrugged to her husband, then turned and followed behind them.
Tim was alone, essentially, with his family already inside out of the sun and the Chauffeur and the Concierge quickly unloading the Baker's possessions and rushing them into the Hotel. He watched the operation from the shade of a pillar, feeling out of control of the situation.
Tim Baker didn't like not being in control. He'd lost control of his wife; she'd been having an affair with another man for months, possibly years, but Tim -- no longer sexually interested in Camille -- had allowed it to continue because it made her happy ... and when Camille was happy, the rest of the Baker Family was happy.
He'd lost control of his business, too. The financial crash had put him on the verge of bankruptcy and he done some things that weren't quite legitimate to keep afloat. Thank goodness his brother was there to help him keep things afloat.
So, with nothing to do, Tim headed inside the hotel and wandered toward the rear, toward the best lemonade in the state.
Behind him, the Chauffeur and the Concierge moved close to one another and watched the lead of the Baker Family disappear into the shadowed interior of the century old structure.
"You found them where they were supposed to be?" Harold asked quietly.
"Right at the junction," Jake answered. "How exactly do you--"
Jake cut his question short. There were somethings about Harold and the Hotel that he simply didn't want to know, such as how the man knew who would make a good addition to the Hotel's permanent guest registry; or how he managed to get those people here in the first place.
Instead, he looked out of the corner of his eye to Harold, with his hand outstretched, and asked with a knowing tone, "And ... my client...?"
Harold reached into his pocket and pulled out a pair of keys -- one a room key, the other a hand cuff key -- and instructed the Chauffeur simply, "Be gentle with her. She's never done this before ... even though she thinks she always wanted to do so."
As Jake's penis began an early rise, he smiled and acknowledged, "As I always am, I will be gentle this time, too."
He began to head inside, then stopped and turned back to Harold. "And the Bakers. Will they be needing a ride back to their vehicle any time soon."
Harold smiled, then turned away from the Chauffeur to look out across the grounds of the Hotel California. More to himself than to Jake, he mused, "No ... I don't think so. The Bakers won't be going anywhere soon ... if ever."