Honey-Do Lists Gone Wild

[SEVERUSMAX]

I was thinking of that infamous phenomenon in our culture of uxorious husbands and their domineering wives with the "honey do lists."

Now, what if this took a sexual turn? What if there were wives who were still as irritatingly bossy, but nevertheless had the redeeming virtue to at least demand things that a man would really enjoy....such as servicing their friends or sisters or something like that....perhaps even servicing other guys?

It would still be a bit fem dom, admittedly, but for a switch like me, all male dom all the time isn't a good balance. And it would be in stark contrast to the glut of cuckold/chastity stories that seem to be so ubiquitous.

 

[Hypoxia]

I was thinking of that infamous phenomenon in our culture of uxorious husbands and their domineering wives with the "honey do lists."

Now, what if this took a sexual turn? What if there were wives who were still as irritatingly bossy, but nevertheless had the redeeming virtue to at least demand things that a man would really enjoy....such as servicing their friends or sisters or something like that....perhaps even servicing other guys?

It would still be a bit fem dom, admittedly, but for a switch like me, all male dom all the time isn't a good balance. And it would be in stark contrast to the glut of cuckold/chastity stories that seem to be so ubiquitous.

Sounds good with the right setup; this could be an endless series. Or, as a challenge, write a tantalizing ending first. For a shocker (which might not go over well in some categories) wife Wanda happily watches hubby Hal in a daisychain with 2 other guys. For less likelihood of negativity, Hal daisychains with two of Wanda's ladyfriends. Maybe she films the encounter. Then she recalls how Hal came to do her her bidding.

Hal was fairly crude, rude, and arrogant, mildly dom-kinky, but a decent provider. Wanda, not really submissive but without high libido either, mostly acquiesced to his minor nastiness. Then she did something brilliant at work and won a huge promotion; her income is now many times Hal's.

Wanda steadily learns that 1) money is power, 2) power can force Hal to her strengthening will, and 3) she likes to watch. She Pavlov-trains Hal as her on-demand sex toy to be played with by whomever she wants, with her orders masked as honey-do lists. Fun ensues.

* Honey-do clean Merri and Zondra's assholes with your tongue. You can fuck them later.
* Honey-do walk naked around the block with a fleshlight on your cock. After midnight is okay.
* Honey-do make Jenna cum using only your little fingers. Either she screams or you will.

The end returns to the beginning with Wanda aiming the camera and plotting her next play sessions... which could spin out to an endless series, each starting and ending with Wanda watching and recording the fuckfest and detailing what led there.

* Episode: She takes him along on a business trip, installs him in a hotel suite, and sends a string of fetishists his way.
* Episode: They vacation at an exotic erotic resort; yeah, more orgies.
* Episode: Wanda concentrates on Hal doing her immediate family, all ages and genders, maybe at a holiday gathering, maybe on sequential weekends.
* Episode: a weird political twist at state and national party conventions; cue the slithering toupee.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

All intriguing premises....Donald Trump as Melania's secretly pussy-whipped pet? Maybe his run for President is at her behest, because she wants to be the first foreign First Lady?

Melania: "Honey, run for President, will you?"

Donald: "But, Mel......"

Melania: "Do it, or I won't peg you again for a month! I want to be First Lady!"

Okay, end of tangent, back on topic....that last idea of yours really had me thrown.

The reverse order of endings first is interesting, but a bit tough for me. I find that as I write a story, the characters don't always want to go that direction, and when I force them to, anyway, at least for me, the dialogue and action comes across stilted.

If you know of a way to make it work, though, sounds clever as a way to turn the whole writing process on its head.

 

[Hypoxia]

All intriguing premises....Donald Trump as Melania's secretly pussy-whipped pet? Maybe his run for President is at her behest, because she wants to be the first foreign First Lady?

Melania: "Honey, run for President, will you?"

Donald: "But, Mel......"

Melania: "Do it, or I won't peg you again for a month! I want to be First Lady!"

Okay, end of tangent, back on topic....that last idea of yours really had me thrown.

Love it! Could also have some session with Bill & Hill.

The reverse order of endings first is interesting, but a bit tough for me. I find that as I write a story, the characters don't always want to go that direction, and when I force them to, anyway, at least for me, the dialogue and action comes across stilted.

If you know of a way to make it work, though, sounds clever as a way to turn the whole writing process on its head.

Some of my stories (especially journal-type series) are only extended teleplays that need never end; some are driven by the setup, with characters writing their own scenes; and some are driven entirely by the image I want at story's end.

One trick for the last is to envisage that final scene with a familiar cast and setting. I already know how the players act and talk; the finale is merely the last plot point they must hit. It may be trivial in itself like one of Hitchcock's mcguffins. Much drama, hilarity, tragicomedy may revolve around it. That's fun.

 

[tnhardon]

I like the idea. My mind actually went in a different direction than most of the other posters who took the dom/sub approach to it. Maybe instead they have a much more normal relationship. She writes out a list for him every weekend of things she wants him to do around the house. Eventually she adds "Me " to the list, which he finds playful but doesn't take seriously. After some time, she continues to put flirty suggestions like "get naked for me" or "send me a picture of you naked", and he eventually decided to play along one day. She is surprised to see him play along, but is excited that he finally followed through. She continues every week to add a new point to the list that gets more and more adventurous. At first it starts out tame but works his way up to "allow my friend to catch a glimpse of you naked" and "have sex with me in front of someone".

I think that this would offer a more playful spin on the story idea. I personally am not as into Dom/sub relationships, but I think my approach would open up to a larger audience.

 

[tnhardon]

The reverse order of endings first is interesting, but a bit tough for me. I find that as I write a story, the characters don't always want to go that direction, and when I force them to, anyway, at least for me, the dialogue and action comes across stilted.

If you know of a way to make it work, though, sounds clever as a way to turn the whole writing process on its head.

I am not a huge fan of the ending first story telling. I find that it tends to make things difficult to follow and can sometimes cause the structure to get messy. The only time I think it is good would be if you need to introduce conflict into a story that will have a long lead up without any conflict. Example, if it is going to take you ten chapters or more to get to some conflict, maybe you flash forward to a bad conflict, way down the road. This prevents you from having to force conflict early into a story that doesn't need it. The way you'd need to do this is open with something horrible happening, like the main characters get arrested or into some circumstance that is dire. You then move to the open where the main characters are normal, and we get the opportunity to watch them evolve into the characters that we were introduced to at the beginning of the story.

 

[Hypoxia]

I am not a huge fan of the ending first story telling. I find that it tends to make things difficult to follow and can sometimes cause the structure to get messy.

Oh, I don't insist the ending must *appear* first, although that can make a good tease if done right. I do favor the approach (one of several as I mentioned) of working with the ending in mind -- as a challenge, a goal, a point to be made, a twist, whatever, rather than always poking around in the dark trying to figure what happens next.

Re: the OP, I'd think of where the honey-do program would ultimately lead -- or where I'd *want* it to lead. Do I want her to go totally domme on his whining ass? Do I want him to revolt and find some tricky revenge? Do I want them to go polyamory, incestuous, role-playing, religious, or what? It's the author's choice.

 

[tnhardon]

Oh, I don't insist the ending must *appear* first, although that can make a good tease if done right. I do favor the approach (one of several as I mentioned) of working with the ending in mind -- as a challenge, a goal, a point to be made, a twist, whatever, rather than always poking around in the dark trying to figure what happens next.

Re: the OP, I'd think of where the honey-do program would ultimately lead -- or where I'd *want* it to lead. Do I want her to go totally domme on his whining ass? Do I want him to revolt and find some tricky revenge? Do I want them to go polyamory, incestuous, role-playing, religious, or what? It's the author's choice.

I agree you have to write with the end in mind; or at least think a lot further ahead, depending on the length of the story. A long series can be a little more organic, but you always need to have direction in mind when writing.

 

[Carnevil9]

I like the idea. My mind actually went in a different direction than most of the other posters who took the dom/sub approach to it. Maybe instead they have a much more normal relationship. She writes out a list for him every weekend of things she wants him to do around the house. Eventually she adds "Me " to the list, which he finds playful but doesn't take seriously. After some time, she continues to put flirty suggestions like "get naked for me" or "send me a picture of you naked", and he eventually decided to play along one day. She is surprised to see him play along, but is excited that he finally followed through. She continues every week to add a new point to the list that gets more and more adventurous. At first it starts out tame but works his way up to "allow my friend to catch a glimpse of you naked" and "have sex with me in front of someone".

I think that this would offer a more playful spin on the story idea. I personally am not as into Dom/sub relationships, but I think my approach would open up to a larger audience.

This was my first thought on reading the OP, too. The husband is getting more and more reluctant to do the never-ending list of chores his wife comes up with. So they reach a compromise.

[Slight aside here: I don't think it was mentioned yet upthread, but often the "honey do" list is composed of chores written on little pieces of paper, stuffed in a big jar, rather than an actual list. The husband grabs one at random and has to do it.]

Anyway, the compromise is that for every three real chores in the jar, there will be one of the sort "redeem this coupon for a one-hour blowjob" or "fuck me in the ass," etc. Now the husband gleefully reaches in to the jar each Saturday, doing chore after chore until he gets one of the "prize" chores.

 

[Hypoxia]

...the compromise is that for every three real chores in the jar, there will be one of the sort "redeem this coupon for a one-hour blowjob" or "fuck me in the ass," etc. Now the husband gleefully reaches in to the jar each Saturday, doing chore after chore until he gets one of the "prize" chores.

Q: What's to keep hubby from cheating by cherry-picking the slips?
A: Wifey must keep an eye on the sly fella when he's slip-diving.

Q: What if hubby sneaks exact copies of prize slips into the jar?
A: Wifey needs anti-counterfeit technology -- or has more fun.

Q: What if wifey includes slips mandating sex with others?
A: That pushes the boundaries a bit. Could get interesting.

Q: What if hubby finishes ALL the honey-do requests?
A: He'll just have to bust-up some more stuff.

 

[Dale Jane Henparty]

Well, when one of you figures it all out, I can provide color or commentary. Twas a Honey do... for years. I Honey do'd anything that wasn't a roof or underground project. My first job was building a freight loading bumper for a warehouse, and the last was getting to 69 with a 27 year old woman who I had known for 20 years.
So, keep me along for ? advise suggestions.