Honest critique needed for possible submission

[Bayoububba]

Help! I have six chapters written of a story I've been tossing around for years. I have been looking for someone to edit it, but first, I need some feedback and honest criticism. The story is about a handyman turned malesub. There is no cbt or anything violent. I am pretty proud of the storyline, but I need feedback. If you would be willing to check it out, e-mail me or post a reply, I will e-mail you the first couple of chapters.
Thanks for your time,
Bubba

P.S. I am also thinking of having someone write another chapter, possibly from a female point of view.