Holy shit this place is one huge cocktease.

[Guest]

I don't know if he reads here or not, but let me open by thanking backnumber for his praise, as my email reply to him bounced. Your additions to Good Girl are great, and really what finally brought me around to giving writing here more than the barest glimpse of a chance I gave it last time.

On the other hand...

This is easily the most promising porn-story opening I have ever read. I mean seriously, I read it like three times last night, it's perfect: well-written, and with the main character in an absolutely delicious predicament that fills my head with horrible ideas. I came back tonight with like a couple great scenes in my twisted little brain, only to realise that the opening was written months ago and no new threads were ever approved.

I'm almost obsessing over this story now. I'm guessing cutting and pasting it into a new story opening isn't kosher? Maybe I'll have to try my hand at opening one (exactly) like it, but the story I submitted last time disappeared under mysterious circumstances and that's made me wary. I don't know if it was rejected or what, though I have enough confidence in my own abilities to kind of wonder if it was. But yeah, I want to redo that one too, it was a cool premise. Maybe I'll try to do something this weekend.

Anyway, I'm still surfing around trying to find stuff that catches my eye. My tastes are fairly specific, but any editors looking for someone to abuse and mistreat their female protagonists should feel free to hock their creations in this thread.

 

[switch76]

Anyway, I'm still surfing around trying to find stuff that catches my eye. My tastes are fairly specific, but any editors looking for someone to abuse and mistreat their female protagonists should feel free to hock their creations in this thread.

You could try my story "A bet leads to domination in the office".

I'm not sure if it's hardcore enough for you. The loser of the bet is reluctant rather than forced to do things. Sort of "No, No, I can't....OK if you insist...Yes, Yes".

Also try to restrict the action to only the main guy and girl(s). No gangbangs with group of guys.

Check it out and see if you like it.

P.S. Why are you registered as a guest? Your Chyoo username/password should work on these message boards. This will give you more options such as sending people private messages.

 

[gizmoo69]

I say go for it! Orgasmosexicon seems to have vanished, so try and contact her (through this board or through feedback on CHYOO) and if you can't get hold of her then do it. Make sure you credit her it you do so though and make it clear that it is not your original work.

You're right, it's a really good idea for a story, and very well written. I do have a concern with the age though. CHYOO rules say that no characters can be under 18, and although the main character is technically over 18, transforming into a 16 year old is a grey area but probably not cool (and IMHO less sexy than an 18 yr old), and could lead to the story being rejected. Having said that though, it got accepted in the past!

Going off course, you could try my story, Fun with the family. A couple of the threads lead down the whole dominance/sado-masochism thing (see "Play it safe" or "Headmaster's Office") and I don't mind you going mad (try to keep it to the theme of the story though).

 

[JOHNEARLE]

Fun With Family is one good story

 

[gizmoo69]

Thanks a lot, man. You should add something to it.