Holiday/hotel room share with the neighbour

[FantasisingMale]

Could this work as a story?

A younger couple in their early 30's are invited to a free holiday by their older neighbour, early 50's. His wife can't make it and he has 2 spare tickets. He's always flirting with the mans young wife.

They get to the hotel and it's in the middle of nowhere. There's complications with the booking. Hotel owner is an angry man who doesn't seem to want them there. Older neighbour takes over situation so they aren't stranded in middle of nowhere. It seems he has booked two rooms, one for him and the wife one for the husband, Hotel owner insentient that no one stops in any other room or they will be thrown out. Or brings guests back.

Situation seems awkward but husband has no choice and watches his wife go to join a room with older neighbour.

Older neighbour has purposely lost her luggage. Tells her not to worry as he has been out and bought her some things.


They come down for dinner and she is wearing what can only be described as slutty clothes. He then explains how no one must suspect she isn't a couple with older neighbour or they will be thrown out. This leads to the older neighbour taking his flirting further. Kissing in public. Touching. Dancing together. The young
wife just looks at husband with shrugged shoulders as if to say what else can we do?

When they come down to the beach she walks holding the older neighbours hand wearing a tiny little thong. It's a g string that barely covers her. Her nice bum is out on full display. The older neighbour has only bought this type of item to wear.

They hang out together and husband hears that they have one double bed which they share. She sleeps in the sexy lingerie he's got her.


After walking about so slutty for a few days and having the older neighbour kiss her ad touch her she starts getting really horny. In bed he starts to touch her bum and eventually they have passionate sex.

They come down together the next day and the husband notices she's acting more and more like the older mans wife and she is enjoying it. She tells him they might as well just get on with it for the next few weeks they are there.


Older neighbour tells the husband his wife is his now and to accept it. It continues from there...



Could this work?

 

[Hypoxia]

The premise strains my credulity. Sure, the right author (not me) could FORCE it to work. We need a good excuse why hubby+wife can't just return home and skip the now-fucked vacation situation. We must turn hubby into a cartoon caricature of a cuck-to-be. Did wife and older neighbor plot this out? If so, wouldn't they have easier ways to hook up? I can see this as a JustPlainBob story.

 

[Nanders]

Sure, the right author (not me) could FORCE it to work.

Well the right author could force any funny story to work

 

[MatthewVett]

I feel like it would make more sense if everyone was staying at the same place, for example, the older neighbor's beach house, but the husband is on business most of the day, so the neighbor spends more time with his wife than he does. Maybe he had a business trip somewhere, mentioned it to the neighbor, and he, the neighbor, invited the couple to stay with him instead of a hotel.

 

[FantasisingMale]

The premise strains my credulity. Sure, the right author (not me) could FORCE it to work. We need a good excuse why hubby+wife can't just return home and skip the now-fucked vacation situation. We must turn hubby into a cartoon caricature of a cuck-to-be. Did wife and older neighbor plot this out? If so, wouldn't they have easier ways to hook up? I can see this as a JustPlainBob story.

A couple of factors that could help; the wife has lost her luggage but the couple have both lost their bank cards meaning they no money. The neighbour is buying the tickets home and if asked would say it's a long process etc. They are stranded in the middle of nowhere.

Possible twist, the neighbour may of been here before. The hotel owners could be in on this with the promise of getting to see this all in action and watching a sexy young wife walk around in the tiny little thongs he gives her to wear.

 

[blin18]

It only really makes sense as a farce, like the old fashioned Monty Python movies like The Meaning of Life. I'm thinking of the sex education scene with John Cleese.

http://youtu.be/PqI-28meTZ8

The trick is to include lots of deadpan humour and pretend its all perfectly normal, not try too hard to explain it.