Historical First Time Story

Chicklet

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Inspired by the " Kinky Medeival (sp?) " thread

What about a historical first time story. You know, she's the innocent virgin who has never known the touch of a man et cetra...

Any time period would be good, but I was thinking ancient times would be really cool, because a lot of imagination could come into play. I like the idea about breaking her hymen with his fingers.

If you brought it a bit closer to the present you could have the lord taking her virginity - maybe in a BDSM or NonConsent situation - or you could have her new husband in the room, watching.

I just think it would be a lot of fun for anyone to read or write.

Takers?? = )

Chicklet
 
If the young maiden is a commoner being taken by the lord, you might want to consider a scene where she is bathed by handmaidens (maybe a milkbath) to be prepared for him. That might be hot!
 
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SilvaTungDevil said:
you might want to consider a scene where she is bathed by handmaidens (maybe a milkbath) to be prepared for him.

Excellent! that would be so cool!

Is that historically accurate or just a nifty idea?

Chicklet
 
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Chicklet said:

Is that historically accurate or just a nifty idea?


How the hell would I know?:) Just a nifty idea I guess. Plus I'll make any excuse for a little lesbionic water (or milk) splashing. Seriously, if she is gonna be taken by a lord instead of her husband to be, then this could kinda get her into the mood. You know, innocent peasant maiden turns into saucy bedwench!
 
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SilvaTungDevil said:
innocent peasant maiden turns into saucy bedwench!

I'm glad people like you are around, because I only think in terms of NonConsent.

It probably would be cool either way = )

Chicklet
 
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Chicklet said:


, because I only think in terms of NonConsent.

Chicklet

Oh I think nonconsent is dandy in a story but its no fun for me if the subject doesnt get some satisfaction out of it.

Hey you could go into some detail too about the husband to be watching and getting turned on. I really the like the sounds of that. Its so much fun to see people get turned on in situations where they're not supposed to. Dark Dirty, Fuck yeah!
 
Chicklet said:

Any time period would be good, but I was thinking ancient times would be really cool, because a lot of imagination could come into play. I like the idea about breaking her hymen with his fingers.

If you brought it a bit closer to the present you could have the lord taking her virginity - maybe in a BDSM or NonConsent situation.

I've been working on a "full length" story to my very old role play, In the Castle..., for a while now.

Maybe someday I'll be able to finish it...
 
I'm writing a story about that, a Lord rapes a young Lady
the setting is in the victorian age, and yes, there is some lesbian action too, look at the threat ' a victorian rape story'.

a young Lady is lured into a greenhouse in a big mansion,
there she is prepared by her grand aunt. While she is licking her intimate parts, her uncle surprises them. He forces her to have sex with him or else he would tell her father.

Another idea I have is to rape a young Lady by an old pervert.
An innocent maiden walks into the woods, she is followed by an older lord, they meet, he start to fondle, she resists, she tries to escape, he drags her into a barn and fucks the hell out off her.

:p
 
Dreieck said:

Another idea I have is to rape a young Lady by an old pervert.
An innocent maiden walks into the woods, she is followed by an older lord, they meet, he start to fondle, she resists, she tries to escape, he drags her into a barn and fucks the hell out off her.

is this one up for grabs or are you going to do it?

Puppi I would love to read the finished piece WHEN you finish <i have faith!>

Chicklet
 
Historical

How about the lord exercises his right of 'First Night' a right lords used to take to sleep with any woman on her wedding night before the husband.
He has the bride and groom seized from the secret forrest wedding ceremony (they were in love and wanted to wed in secret) and as punishment for defying him has them dragged to the castle. The woman itied to the bed the man is stripped and wipped to a post in the room where he will have to watch the unspeakable acts of sex upon his wife by first the lord and then prehaps later by the lords guards.
While the lord is raping and sodomising the virgin bride he notices the groom becoming more and more aroused, he rapes the groom which causes the groom to experience the most intense orgasm of his life while his now loveless bride watches in dispair.
 
Chicklet said:


is this one up for grabs or are you going to do it?


Well, right now I'm looking for an editor and I'm writing
a second part with the same persons.

It's about a young lady living in 1908, who visits her uncle.
Her uncle has a business associate and he's willing to make
a deal if he can have his way with his niece.

Her uncle agrees but first takes her virginity.

In the second part the young lady is introduced by an 68-year old woman in the art of lesbian love. But her uncle had set her up. She is caught red handed and is forced to have sex with the business associate of her uncle.

I agree with the idea that the subject must get satisfaction of it.

If you want to read the rough version, let me know, it could inspire you.
 
Chicklet said:
loveless? that makes me sad. otherwise I like the idea.

Must have been feeling unconciously blue that day:(

They all live happily ever after and form a democratic sexual coalition bringing bi-sexual love to the nation.
 
cliffchuff said:


Must have been feeling unconciously blue that day:(

They all live happily ever after and form a democratic sexual coalition bringing bi-sexual love to the nation.

giggle

see, that's the kind of thing i'm talking about! =)

actually I think to some extent certain stories should have a degree of ... well...what is the word I'm looking for...like, the characters should be a little detatched, but i think to another extent they should enjoy themselves a *bit* - i feel guilty if my characters are completely miserable.

Chicklet
 
gotta say, I am too lazy to read all the postings in this thread

anyway: what about this: there is this virgin. I guess she is a princess or something like this. Now she turns 18.

However, there is this one rule: Any royalty (at least the female ones) have to remain virgin until the 18th birthday. Then, on the 18th birthday, she has to be deflowered by 5 guys. Because, her future husband should get an experienced woman, not a total innocent, unexperienced virgin. This rule is active since about 200 years, so no one really protests against it. Everyone thinks it is normal.

So now, on her 18th birthday, this virgin is bathed and dressed up. Then she is brought to this chamber with the 5 guys. This guys teach her everything about sex. Stuff like anal sex, oral sex, deep throat, sandwich fuck, fisting ....
 
OK... now I've got like 20 different ideas floating around in my head from reading all these threads here... Need to sort them out and get them down on paper, without mixing them all up into a story about a black android being dominated by prehistoric clown...
 
Svenskaflicka said:
OK... now I've got like 20 different ideas floating around in my head from reading all these threads here... Need to sort them out and get them down on paper, without mixing them all up into a story about a black android being dominated by prehistoric clown...

COOL!

You write that! I'd read it.

Oh! remember, that's Replicant or Cyborg, not Anderoid ...

-T
 
Story Ideas

I've been doing a lot of academic work studying the colonial period in america. and while it might not completely work with some of the themes we've outlined, I'm considering doing something with

A. a poor girl who becomes a rich womans maid. The husband of the family chooses to rape her (non-consent...I want to try my hand) and she has to leave the family in disgrace when she's pregnant (or perhaps b/c the wife is barren she agrees to sleep with the husband and give them her child...not a non-consent storyline...in exchange for enough money to start up a new life)

B. a girl who becomes pregnant by one man and sleeps with the riches boy in town. When she's giving birth the midwife asks her who the father is and she names the rich boy, b/c of local belief that a girl can only tell the truth while giving birth she gets to marry the rich boy. Only to discover that he's into B&D

C. A quadroon daughter is selected as a mistress to a rich man of new orleans at the quadroon ball (a real event historically) by her mother who wants a better life for her daughter.


What sounds most appealing?
 
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deliciously_naughty said:
I've been doing a lot of academic work studying the colonial period in america. and while it might not completely work with some of the themes we've outlined, I'm considering doing something with

A. a poor girl who becomes a rich womans maid. The husband of the family chooses to rape her (non-consent...I want to try my hand) and she has to leave the family in disgrace when she's pregnant (or perhaps b/c the wife is barren she agrees to sleep with the husband and give them her child...not a non-consent storyline...in exchange for enough money to start up a new life)

B. a girl who becomes pregnant by one man and sleeps with the riches boy in town. When she's giving birth the midwife asks her who the father is and she names the rich boy, b/c of local belief that a girl can only tell the truth while giving birth she gets to marry the rich boy. Only to discover that he's into B&D

C. A quadroon daughter is selected as a mistress to a rich man of new orleans at the quadroon ball (a real event historically) by her mother who wants a better life for her daughter.


What sounds most appealing?


To my opinion A

But why does it always have to be ' a poor girl' who's abused.
that's so done (maid - master) , in higher classes, rich girls are abused too,
Perhaps the rich man could not keep off his hands of the daughter
of his best (rich) friend, they end up alone in the stables,...
the rich girl ends up pregnant, big scandal in the family,...
this could be a new approach.
 
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Dreieck said:



To my opinion A

But why does it always have to be ' a poor girl' who's abused.
that's so done (maid - master) , in higher classes, rich girls are abused too,
Perhaps the rich man could not keep off his hands of the daughter
of his best (rich) friend, they end up alone in the stables,...
the rich girl ends up pregnant, big scandal in the family,...
this could be a new approach.

b/c it's more historically accurate.

and b/c it's not terribly plausible, upper class girls generally always had a chaperone or companion. fiction to a certain extent, but not historically...I have a degree, I can't stretch it that much.
 
Hey,

Make her a bond servant instead of just a poor girl. Adds a little more helplessness on her part.

Chicklet
 
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