"His Gift" with Discussion on Non-Consent and Rape as a Gift

[thesweetsweetness]

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[soflabbwlvr]

get ready to be roasted by lovecraft

 

[thesweetsweetness]

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[the_apocalypse]

I read your story and, as it is in the non-consent/reluctance category I got what I expected. A story of hot sex that begins against the author's (your) wishes, but culminates with you reaching heights of ecstasy that you could never have dreamt of in your wildest dreams.

Yes some people will hate it but equally as many, if not more will thoroughly enjoy it, just don't let the minority stop you from continuing to write your fantasies, after all others have fantasies that are not to everyones tastes

 

[Guest]

The advantage of negative comments

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[Archangel1978]

Very well written. I'd just like to say it was a hot story. I don't know about the subject matter as I'm not one for non consentual yet, but who knows. As far as this being your first story, I'm really excited to see more from you. You've really hit it out of the park. I'm just curious are you going to be all non/consent or are you planning on exploring other themes here in lit?
Congratz again on the fist story published.

 

[Saucyminx]

Well done for a first try

I'm looking forward to reading more from you. And big girl panties are definitely an asset when posting round these parts. Welcome!

 

[SydneyBlake]

My only negative is that you seemed to rush things in places. I seem to say that a lot to people. You could easily expand the work. Also, I think that erotica works best when writers understand that suspense is what makes it appealing. The penetration came too fast and your resolution left me empty. When you say "The rest of the night . . . " No, that's the point of the writing. I also wanted to know what happens when she is alone with her boyfriend, and how that resolves.

Welcome to lit.

I agree. You were off to a good start, and then left us to our imaginations. In erotica, the doors are always left open. We want you to show us.

Good first story, tho. Looking forward to the next one!

Syd