Hip Hop Porn

NoJo

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If you want to be part of the new postmodern pop Zeitgeist, what better way to create a new, "Urban feel" erotic story than to follow the Hip-Hoppers example of using samples.

My first attempt. The stories were truly random (I just picked a random story id and scrolled to a typical paragraph)

Not there yet, but it's a new style for me. Expect better flow as I develop my craft.





“Ahhhhhhhhhh Owwwwwwww Gosh daddy, your cock feels so good inside me,” I scream out in pain and pleasure. “How does your little girls pussy feel daddy,”

My cock began to convulse and so did my mom and we reached a magnificent orgasm.

"Man you're a great cock sucker. I wouldn't mind feeding you a load, but I really want to fuck that pussy of yours."

I could see a pool of white bubbling semen gathered just inside the lips of my little girl’s cunt. Her continued aroused spasms caused it to shift slightly and some dribbled out and spilled out onto her exposed asshole.

She took it all and when he withdrew it was with a clean cock. There was not one bit of feces. She gave him a clean cock just as he gave the other woman a clean dildoe.

"Alan, Alan, Alan, oh god, I'm cumming again, I'm cumming again. Fill me with your cum, Alan. Oh, godddddd, oohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh."
 
Sub Joe said:
Oh, godddddd, oohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh."
When I read this aloud for my book group, are the "ddd's" meant to be stuttered? Multiple hard consecutive consonants always present a problem for the read-alouders. The "hhh's" I interpret with a long exhalation, or sometimes with a "hoo-hoo-hooooo," but that's a bit too owl-like to be sexy.

Suggestions?
 
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shereads said:
When I read this aloud for my book group, are the "ddd's" meant to be stuttered? Multiple hard consecutive consonants always present a problem for the read-alouders. The "hhh's" I interpret with a long exhalation, or sometimes with a "hoo-hoo-hooooo," but that's a bit too owl-like to be sexy.

Suggestions?

This isn't as frivolous as you probably think. I'm planning to volunteer with a local group who record books for the blind, and I want to contribute some Literotica stories. There's an almost total lack of dirty stories for the blind. I think the confusion over how to pronounce "cummmminggggg" is an issue.
 
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shereads said:
This isn't as frivolous as you probably think. I'm planning to volunteer with a local group who record books for the blind, and I want to contribute some Literotica stories. There's an almost total lack of dirty stories for the blind. I think the confusion over how to pronounce "cummmminggggg" is an issue.

Wow, I didn't even know blind people had sex
 
Originally quoted by Sher
Oh, godddddd, oohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh."

Just located the story. The whole line was


"Oh, godddddd, oohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. My keyboard's got stuck again." She moaned.
 
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shereads said:

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Originally posted by Sub Joe
Wow, I didn't even know blind people had sex
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They do if you sneak up on them.

Oh my good god, that is fucking hilarious! Thank you She, I think I've just scared my entire house with that explosion of laughter.

The Earl
 
^
Sher, what he said.

You actually got my pussy wet with that one.
 
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TheEarl said:
Oh my good god, that is fucking hilarious! Thank you She, I think I've just scared my entire house with that explosion of laughter.

The Earl

I'm glad you liked it, but I really shouldn't have posted it. I didn't realize until later how hurtful that might be if a blind person sees it.
 
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