highschool student with teacher...

rubytues

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there are just not enough of these. there is a whole year for highschool girls when they are legal...

i guess it's because i had a crush on a teacher of mine in highschool and i still have that unresolved...thing there. i want a really good story about a highschool girl and a teacher... not silly... like, i've read some on other sites where they were totally unrealistic. i'd write it myself but in my other sorts of stories if i base a story on something that happened to me a character takes on many of my characteristics, which for this sort of story would obviously make me nervous....
 
a good idea

why not change the characteristics a little, a story from you based on true events would be a touch of realism.
something to get you thinking, a story with words from someone with the experience to pull off a true work of art from the heart.
 
rubytues said:
there are just not enough of these. there is a whole year for highschool girls when they are legal...

Actually, there's about half a year, give or take. :) I was 17 my entire senior year and did not turn 18 until the summer. Hell, I also have a cousin who was still 17 when he entered his first year of college and didn't turn 18 until September.


On another note, what do you consider "silly" in a "schoolgirl crush" story? :confused:
 
Try this on for size, and tell me if it's the type of work you like... :)

Attention After Class

It was the first piece of work that I did, erotica-wise, and I think it's not my best work, but it's still alright, probably... seem to keep just above the cut-off point for a H, so it's all good :D.

Capt
 
BedtimeStories said:
On another note, what do you consider "silly" in a "schoolgirl crush" story? :confused:

I agree....though I think it might help if you tellus what you like in a story
 
rubytues said:
there are just not enough of these. there is a whole year for highschool girls when they are legal...

Unless the girls if fucking dumb and is repeating a grade. So she could be 18 to 19.

One day a blonde came home from school and came to her mother and said, "Hey, Mommy! Mommy! Today in school we learned to count. The other kids could only count to three but I can count to Ten..... 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10!"

The mother responds, "Very good honey." The blonde asks, "Is that because I'm a blonde mommy?" And the mother responds, "Yes dear."

Next day the blonde came home and went to her mother and said, "Today in school we learned our ABCs! The other kids could only get to D but I can get to K! .... A, B, C, D, E, F, G, H, I, J, K!"

The mother says, "Very good honey." The blonde then asked. "Is that because I'm a blonde, Mommy?" The mother responds, "Yes dear."

The third day the blonde come home from school and said to her mother, "Mommy today in school we went swimming! But I was the only one who had breasts. Is that because I'm a blonde, Mommy?"
And the mother responds, "No Honey, it's because you're twenty five."
 
MNGuy said:
Unless the girls if fucking dumb and is repeating a grade. So she could be 18 to 19.

I'm thinking have the girl be street-smart (ie: Not ditzy or an idiot or anything) but just a horrible student (doesn't study, sleeps in class due to being exhausted from partying all night, etc.)
 
Texguy84 said:
I'm thinking have the girl be street-smart (ie: Not ditzy or an idiot or anything) but just a horrible student (doesn't study, sleeps in class due to being exhausted from partying all night, etc.)

and finally, teach clues in what she's prepared to do for grades?
 
there have been a whole run of these on the "New" index the past few days, some good some less so. Why not explore?
 
Svengali

I am currently working on an idea of a bi-sexual teacher who has Svengali type talents which he uses to seduce students. Not hypno or anything like that just a smooth way of making students look at the world from his point of view and convincing them it's their view. Hopefully ending up with a bi-sexual harem of doting students.

Just the basics so far but it's growing.
 
gah! i leave for a week and there are soo many replies...

well, things i don't like and think are ridiculous would be like, teachers who give their students bad grades to bribe them into sex or ask them to stay after class so they can talk to them about their bra being too tight. it's kinda stupid, teachers just don't do things like that... it'd be like a girl walking into a room of strange males and just grabbing one of them and starting to jerk them off... i also don't like when they make the girl look like barbie. girls in highschool are real damnit, and only a very small amount of them have the measurements of marilyn monroe!

capt... i like yours excepting the part where the teacher walks in and just does whatever he says... that's another example. unless this gentleman has somehow hypnotized him or is controlling her mind, no woman i've ever met would just walk in on a friend having sex with someone he should by no means be having sex with and join in.... i've never bought that in any story i've read. i like how your story makes more of the taboo of it than most stories do, tho.

i also like texguy and mikro's ideas a bit... texguy because there are slow oppurtunities in it tutoring, weeks and weeks of agonizing tutoring. mikro's because cults are fun...
 
rubytues said:
capt... i like yours excepting the part where the teacher walks in and just does whatever he says... that's another example. unless this gentleman has somehow hypnotized him or is controlling her mind, no woman i've ever met would just walk in on a friend having sex with someone he should by no means be having sex with and join in.... i've never bought that in any story i've read. i like how your story makes more of the taboo of it than most stories do, tho.
yes I agree totally with your analysis on the story, and again, my only excuse is that it was my first! :p

still, a pretty fair go had been made for a first-time erotica piece, if I do say so myself :nana:

glad you liked parts of it. if I could work over it again with the help of improved ability and hindsight, it would end up being a much better story, but then I do not think that would be fair to the work so I leave it as it is. :)

Enjoy hunting for more teach/student stories, and have fun on Lit! :D

Capt
 
My story

I'm 23 and actually had an affair with my chemistry teacher when I was 18. Lemmie know if u need some inspiration. I actually got good grades so that whole played out extra credit crap did not apply for me.
 
rubytues said:
there is a whole year for highschool girls when they are legal...
Boys, too.

In my kids' school district, kids have to be five by August 1st to be able to start kindergarten that year, which means that the oldest kids in any given class will be 18 when they start their senior year of high school.

I, on the other hand, started kindergarten at four and college at 17, so I wasn't legal in high school. Some of my classmates were legal, though, either because of the way their birthdays fell or because they'd failed a grade or two.
 
MsJess0125 said:
I'm 23 and actually had an affair with my chemistry teacher when I was 18. Lemmie know if u need some inspiration. I actually got good grades so that whole played out extra credit crap did not apply for me.

so what was the attraction to you of the teacher?
 
Firstly, I went to a private school and we wore uniforms...Secondly, I had a big mouth. I was one of those hyper outgoing, bold types. I was ALWAYS flirting with him and then one day he just started flirting back and i was really shocked at first because I wasn't expecting it to happen. Kinda like that chick from American Beauty, unfortunately...without the shallow thing going on...actually, I was pretty shallow but I didnt talk about it. Anyway, it was really exciting and I thought it was cool and scandalous that I had this mysterious friendship with my teacher and all my little girlfriends were buzzing...
 
MsJess0125 said:
Firstly, I went to a private school and we wore uniforms...Secondly, I had a big mouth. I was one of those hyper outgoing, bold types. I was ALWAYS flirting with him and then one day he just started flirting back and i was really shocked at first because I wasn't expecting it to happen. Kinda like that chick from American Beauty, unfortunately...without the shallow thing going on...actually, I was pretty shallow but I didnt talk about it. Anyway, it was really exciting and I thought it was cool and scandalous that I had this mysterious friendship with my teacher and all my little girlfriends were buzzing...

and who got caught?
 
Ha, no. I really don't think any of my friends suspected we had ACTUALLY had sex. We made jokes during class...it's kind of like, "well it can't be true because they wouldn't be so vocal if it was"...so no bribes...
 
MsJess0125 said:
Ha, no. I really don't think any of my friends suspected we had ACTUALLY had sex. We made jokes during class...it's kind of like, "well it can't be true because they wouldn't be so vocal if it was"...so no bribes...

if they had, what might you havedone to keep it quiet?
 
Am I supposed to be creative or be honest?

Honestly, I prolly would have bribed my girlfriends with something lame like concert tickets or something. One boy suspected, I remember...I might have fucked him to keep him quiet..he had a big crush on me.
 
MsJess0125 said:
Am I supposed to be creative or be honest?

Honestly, I prolly would have bribed my girlfriends with something lame like concert tickets or something. One boy suspected, I remember...I might have fucked him to keep him quiet..he had a big crush on me.

sounding like a sequel already....
 
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