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MarkatLSU

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I've always enjoyed stories that get into the internal thoughts dialogue in a characters head--like how they might imagine an ideal romantic/intimate moment occuring as they watch their dream girl or guy from across a room, or even while they're trying to carry on a conversation with them while not sounding like a blithering idiot :D . It can really be exciting if they're desperately trying to keep their true feelings hidden because of the situation they're in.

I've always wanted to read a story where say there's a lesbian in a situation where it wouldn't necessarily be cool to be a lesbian--say a college freshman cheerleader around her straight fellow cheerleaders (in a story where she actually doesn't convert them all in 1000 words or less, or finds out its a secret "lesbian cheerleading squad"; no easy outs, she has constant fantasies about her friends on the team but is worried about how they'd react if they knew, comes close to accidently letting it slip out at times, etc...).

The same thing with perhaps a pledge to say a top academic sorority, who is joining for the connections and the experience but feels she has to keep that part of herself under wraps or be ostracized, and the fantasy life she leads thinking about her fellow pledges in the house.

I mean for all I know maybe someone has written these stories and I've just missed them, but I can't remember a long story or a series dealing with keeping that identity hidden and relying on the mental fantasy sequences and real emotions of the character as opposed to a happy-ending lesbian lovefest
 
re: Lesbian ideas

Maybe a story about a girl who's gay, and she knows she's gay, but no one she works with knows she's gay. She doesn't want to out herself at work, and also wouldn't want to be involved with anyone from the office, but she can't help the hot feelings that erupt inside her whenever she sees a certain red-headed coworker walk by.

-Chicklet
 
Re: re: Lesbian ideas

Chicklet said:
Maybe a story about a girl who's gay, and she knows she's gay, but no one she works with knows she's gay. She doesn't want to out herself at work, and also wouldn't want to be involved with anyone from the office, but she can't help the hot feelings that erupt inside her whenever she sees a certain red-headed coworker walk by.

-Chicklet


and is the co-worker named Spearmint?
 
Re: re: Lesbian ideas

Chicklet said:
Maybe a story about a girl who's gay, and she knows she's gay, but no one she works with knows she's gay. She doesn't want to out herself at work, and also wouldn't want to be involved with anyone from the office, but she can't help the hot feelings that erupt inside her whenever she sees a certain red-headed coworker walk by.

-Chicklet

Oh yes women in the office place holds all kinds of possibilities. The Female boss who finds herself obsessing over the spritely lil mousy new girl whose working under her and is oh so willing to please...but would be open to her boss's hints of amore? Or when the coworkers go out for a night on the town at the neighborhood tavern, start to get plastered and then our lesbian heroine suddenly blurts out "Damn that round booty looks good in those jeans, Cindy! I wanna pull them off and trace hearts on it with my tongue" And all the weird repercussions that follow:D
 
MarkatLSU, I love this idea very much! I'll try to incorporate in more of my stories! It would be very sexy (for the reader) to "hear" the "secret thoughts" of the main character while there is no "real" sex in the story and the other characters are none the wiser!


~Kenzie :kiss:
 
LustiRusti said:
MarkatLSU, I love this idea very much! I'll try to incorporate in more of my stories! It would be very sexy (for the reader) to "hear" the "secret thoughts" of the main character while there is no "real" sex in the story and the other characters are none the wiser!


~Kenzie :kiss:

I think you are exactly right... the key is the internal struggles the person has.. there are at least as many or more themes from the male point-of-view because of the greater intensity of some taboos
 
I'm glad someone was able to understand what I was trying to say here! :eek:

I think I'm going to try to write some of my stories this way! I think it would be very hot for the story to have no "real" sex in it, but instead the reader discovers the thoughts, feelings, and fantasies of the main character. :)


~Kenzie :kiss:
 
i couldnt agree more.. and i would love to read what you write
 
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