hi

[kailab]

im looking for some feedback on one of my stories that i just posted on the website i wanna make it into a book so feedback is really important- the story is called the vampire alastair and it is located in the erotic horror section of literotica- as stated before any feedback is helpful thanks

 

[CWatson]

We're all lazy, so you'll get much better readership if you provide a direct link to the story itself.