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[sexymathstudent]

Hi, I'm a newbie or "noob" to literotica and story writing. Although, I've been been reading stories for a long time. I find a good story much more arousing then any porn out there. I've decided to experiment by writing my own. Please excuse my lack of experience and please give me advice.

 

[Guest]

First, don't start identical threads. Very annoying.

Secondly, there is a Story Feedback forum, which is better suited for this.

But on first glance?

Paragraphs! Please! It's nearly incomprehensible in this format.

That, and though the casual reader may appreciate the "true story" status, most of the writers do not. That's not really important, I mean.

If you would break it up into bite-size pieces I'd love to take a look. But right now, before coffee, I can't even get through it.

Good luck!

 

[sexymathstudent]

Hi,

yeah sorry about both those problems. i realized that i had absent mindedly titled my post "HI" which is a really bad title. "plz critique my story" is much better. i'm really bad at the internet appearantly b/c i keep making all these faux pas. i don't have any "net etiquite."

 

[Vermilion]

Hi,

yeah sorry about both those problems. i realized that i had absent mindedly titled my post "HI" which is a really bad title. "plz critique my story" is much better. i'm really bad at the internet appearantly b/c i keep making all these faux pas. i don't have any "net etiquite."

Well why don;t you change the first post of this thread to an introduction to yourself? People round here generally prefer to get to know a newbie before they have to do a Q&A

x
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[Jenny_Jackson]

Yeah, what they said. And welcum to the AH.






But you AV is sooooo two weeks ago. That was cock AV week.

 

[Agnol]

What the heck does AV mean?

 

[rachlou]

What the heck does AV mean?

Avatar - the pic below your user name. You can have one after 100 posts.

 

[gauchecritic]

Avatar - the pic below your user name. You can have one after 100 posts.

And avatar is the earthly form that gods take when visiting.

 

[Goldie Munro]

And avatar is the earthly form that gods take when visiting.

Hmm not sure about that!

 

[Tom Collins]

Hi,

yeah sorry about both those problems. i realized that i had absent mindedly titled my post "HI" which is a really bad title. "plz critique my story" is much better. i'm really bad at the internet appearantly b/c i keep making all these faux pas. i don't have any "net etiquite."

Netiquette, like any other form of behavior, is learned through experience, so don't sweat it. Just try not to repeat mistakes and everything ought to be cool.

Welcome to the AH. Hope you enjoy it here, babe.

Nice skin flute ya got there, btw.

 

[scriptordelecto]

Welcome to the AH!

 

[Guest]

And avatar is the earthly form that gods take when visiting.

Is that why I hear angels sing whenever you post?

 

[glynndah]

A welcome for the little newbie from the good little witch.

 

[sexymathstudent]

Welcome to the AH. Hope you enjoy it here, babe.
Nice skin flute ya got there, btw.

THANKS! btw. did anyone read my story? if so what do you think? it is under "plz critique my story"

 

[Grushenka]

Hmm not sure about that!

GC was right. OED:

1. Hindu Myth. The descent of a deity to the earth in an incarnate form.
2. Manifestation in human form; incarnation.
3. Manifestation or presentation to the world as a ruling power or object of worship.
4. loosely, Manifestation; display; phase.

Doesn't even mention the use forum peeps know; though presumably #4 is the reference.

 

[gauchecritic]

Is that why I hear angels sing whenever you post?

Yes, yes it is. On the other hand the time that I post is co-incidental with the time of day when you feel like putting a bucket over your head and hitting it with a 10 pound hammer. I lean towards the angel theory.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Hmm not sure about that!

Looking at your av for example, Goldie--- I'm pretty sure.

 

[Lisa Denton]

Yes, yes it is. On the other hand the time that I post is co-incidental with the time of day when you feel like putting a bucket over your head and hitting it with a 10 pound hammer. I lean towards the angel theory.

(and I thought I was kinky)

 

[sexymathstudent]

(and I thought I was kinky)

u r cute.