Hi there! New to the boards!

[MissFroggy]

Just got my first story posted and I'm working on a few more at the moment. I'd like to get some feedback on this story before I submit the other ones just to make sure I'm on the right track.

Thanks in advance!
MissFroggy

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=139404

 

[Honey123]

MissFroggy -- pretty damn good story...I liked it...gave me good visuals and was somewhat aroused...Keep up the good work!!

Welcome to Lit and to the "Boards"!!

PS -- if you don't mind...take a peek at some of my stories and let me know what you think as well!


*Honey

 

[MissFroggy]

I checked out a couple of your stories... NICE anal action! Such a turn on to read it!

 

[Ms_Kat]

I loved the story with Simon. Very strong imagery. Very good details to complete the image without getting in the way of the story.

I'd love to get more sensually involved in the story. Tell me how the air smelled, how the earth beneath them felt, the taste of his cock in her mouth. (This is something I struggle to include in my own work.)

I hope to see more soon.


Hugs,

Kat

 

[Honey123]

I checked out a couple of your stories... NICE anal action! Such a turn on to read it!

Thank you!!!

 

[MissFroggy]

I'd love to get more sensually involved in the story. Tell me how the air smelled, how the earth beneath them felt, the taste of his cock in her mouth.

Thanks so much for this feedback - it helps out a lot with the next story I'm working on!

 

[RHS71!]

Very nice!

very good imagery, kept me involved right to the last line, when I cringed

 

[MissFroggy]

kept me involved right to the last line, when I cringed

HAHA... thanks for the feedback. That made me laugh a little.