Hi, new author. Busy life. Just getting back into the hang of things.

[Lich Lord]

Hello, hello. I am Lich Lord, a rookie author on this site. I see people here on the forum are just putting in any two cents they see fit and to appropriately join the party, so I will.

A looong time ago I wrote "The Misadventures of Mistress Mamms." and left it hanging with chapter one. I haven't really picked up on it because I didn't like it all that much. I had a few fans that liked it, but to tell the truth, there were to many sentence fragments and spelling errors.

Writing a good story is hard. You see I want to make it long, but not to long and with a plot, and at the same time not seriously romantic and to ridicuously stupid. I'm really trying to walk a fine line here folks. Any advice would be great.

Oh and one more thing, I do realize many aspects of a woman as a whole can make her super sexy. But I like to write about big breasts and that's the way it's going to be. So no need to tell me to tune down the breast size, it's not going to happen. Well, nothing less than DD's anyways.

Funny thing, in real life I think a girl with C's is busty. But in the erotic fiction they gotta be massive.....hey what can I say, G.H. Lawrence and George Tasker were my major influences.

 

[cloudy]

Hello, hello. I am Lich Lord, a rookie author on this site. I see people here on the forum are just putting in any two cents they see fit and to appropriately join the party, so I will.

A looong time ago I wrote "The Misadventures of Mistress Mamms." and left it hanging with chapter one. I haven't really picked up on it because I didn't like it all that much. I had a few fans that liked it, but to tell the truth, there were to many sentence fragments and spelling errors.

Writing a good story is hard. You see I want to make it long, but not to long and with a plot, and at the same time not seriously romantic and to ridicuously stupid. I'm really trying to walk a fine line here folks. Any advice would be great.

Oh and one more thing, I do realize many aspects of a woman as a whole can make her super sexy. But I like to write about big breasts and that's the way it's going to be. So no need to tell me to tune down the breast size, it's not going to happen. Well, nothing less than DD's anyways.

Funny thing, in real life I think a girl with C's is busty. But in the erotic fiction they gotta be massive.....hey what can I say, G.H. Lawrence and George Tasker were my major influences.

Nothing wrong with fantasizing about big-breasted women, however, when I see vital statistics listed it's a huge turn-off. To me, anyway, it reads like a list on a most-wanted poster or somethng, not anything from an erotic story. I don't see that it's necessary to list a bra size rather than just say she's large-breasted.

Just my two cents.

 

[Lord Naraku]

One big thing read your story aloud to yourself, this will bring out alota problems with the way stuff sounds. Secondly I advise finding a muse, just a picture of a nude girl fitting the womans body type will work. That way when you desribe her you can look at the picture or pictures of the girl. I do not advise selecting someone you know as a muse, as the line between the muse and real life blur easily. It also helps alot if tell your readers why you like something. Here is an example:

"I'd always liked thick girls, girls that where alitte wider in the hips and shoulders, with a bit of body fat. Alittle body fat I think looks very feminine, muscle tone and definition is more masculine."

If I just say "thick girls" it's hard for some ppl to relate to it. With the above example it's less likely to turn some ppl off. Basicly try to explain your fetishes. Good luck.

 

[minsue]

Welcome! I've no advice to give to anyone when it comes to writing so I'll just offer up a

 

[pop_54]

Welcome friend, enjoy your stay... I'm afraid I'm not a big tit man myself... 34B's turn me on.. 44DD's turn me off... Just me though, I know a lot of guys place importance on tit size versus erotic.

Always check your stories properly before you submit them to Lit these days... Run a good careful grammar & spell check as well as proof reading for typo's MS Word misses... More than about 2 spell errors and a couple of comma's missed will ensure rejection on Lit... They are very fussy... If you write a story with loads of deliberate spell errors, slang for instance in dialogue, make sure you tell Laurel in the submission box.

Good luck friend.

pops..........

 

[Just-Legal]

Hi! Welcome back! Answers and a warm welcome can always be found in the newbie support forum - just see the link in my sig

*pokes pop* How about 38E's?

 

[pop_54]

Hi! Welcome back! Answers and a warm welcome can always be found in the newbie support forum - just see the link in my sig

*pokes pop* How about 38E's?

Sounds a good compromise to me love

I'm already in trouble with er'in'doors, she's 38C

 

[Guest]

Sounds a good compromise to me love

I'm already in trouble with er'in'doors, she's 38C

Pop - you're in trouble again???




Welcome, Lich Lord!

I echo the advice about listing specific measurements. Unless you have a tape measure stretched around the lady in question it's difficult to know her precise bust, waist and hip sizes.

BUT - you can easily say her tits are huge - and leave it at that.

 

[Just-Legal]

Sounds a good compromise to me love

I'm already in trouble with er'in'doors, she's 38C

*sends er'in'doors some of the lovely lingerie she sells for a living, puts Pops name on them and giftwraps them*

That should get you back in the good books.

Or having her call you a letcherous old perv.

One or the other *g*

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

I'm afraid I'm not a big tit man myself... 34B's turn me on.. 44DD's turn me off...
pops..........

Oh no... I would turn off pops... .

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Oh no... I would turn off pops... .

No, you're just too much woman for his poor old ticker.