Hi Mr_Neb

[jenipenny]

I wanted to thank you for your comments on my story 'A woman for fulfillment' but for some reason I am unable to email you! The system just won't let me! So this is the best I can do!
Thank you for taking the time to give me such good advice. l have submitted a sequel, actually before I read your comments and I'm hoping you will have a look at it too! I'll just have to keep practising!! (That is if they publish it!)

 

[Mr_Neb]

Hi,

No need to thank me. It's not a matter of "practice" for you. You write just fine. That particular genre isn't usually that appealing to me but you managed to get my attention and I enjoyed reading it.

What's more important is that YOU enjoy it. NEVER take the advice of anyone if it makes you move away from where you want your story to go or how you want to get there. Write for YOU first and everyone else second. Then things like votes and criticisms won't be as significant and you'll have much more fun.

Email me anytime.

mr_neb@hotmail.com