Hi from a newbie.

[Madman1597]

Hello fellow writers. I just had my first two stories posted: (Anal) Carol Gives It up & TV Repair. I would welcome any constructive criticism from any of you on the quality and readability of my stories and tips on how to improve them. I was also curious about what people feel is the best format. 1st person narrative, 3rd person subjective, present tense etc..... I'm quite new to writing in this genre. I'm a frustrated novelist(as yet unpublished ) and began jotting down erotic shorts to try to get over the writers block and found I really enjoyed it. Any feedback would be most welcome.
Cheers,
Madman1597.

 

[Debbie]

Here's a link to your bio.


http://literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=54847

 

[Rrrosyn]

Well...

In all honesty...

I am too disappointed that I never got a chance to take it up the ass myself, that I feel envious and can't offer anything constructive.

I do think the Anal catagory needs more stories. It's new and I hope it fills up fast.

Keep it up.