toupoutsou
supremo
- Joined
- Sep 14, 2011
- Posts
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I tried writing a story in 1st person about a woman falling for her personal trainer while her fiance is away.
Tried to incorporate themes of exhibitionism, dialog, inner monologue.
I'd love a female editors check, to make the story read less that it was written by a man.
In the end, anyone who has time to check this, let me know.
Ps: never asked for editor help before, apologies if this isn't the proper way
Tried to incorporate themes of exhibitionism, dialog, inner monologue.
I'd love a female editors check, to make the story read less that it was written by a man.
In the end, anyone who has time to check this, let me know.
Ps: never asked for editor help before, apologies if this isn't the proper way
