Hi all!

[coldfire69]

Hey everybody!

Noob erotic author coming at you from western Canada. Wonder if I could entice any brave souls to take a quick boo at some of my stuff and leave some comments. I've got the six-chaptered Devil's Equinox starting here ...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=442520

I'm still figuring out pacing, ie. just exactly how much fiction to throw in with the erotic had a few helpful anonymous comments so far.

Am blown away by the community here. Will of course comment on your stuff too!

Thx for your patience, and nice to meet you all!

 

[driphoney]

Hi and welcome.

It's a little confusing at first, but you probably want to ask this feedback question on the Story Feedback forum. You might also want to check out the Story Discussion Circle.

This is just were we drive each other crazy.

 

[coldfire69]

Hi and welcome.

It's a little confusing at first, but you probably want to ask this feedback question on the Story Feedback forum. You might also want to check out the Story Discussion Circle.

This is just were we drive each other crazy.

Thx I'll go post there! Nice to meet you!

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

RVC'd. Just read the first part but I like your writing. Gonna read more when I have the time. Should be sleeping now

 

[coldfire69]

Thx B_S, and everyone else ... that's my first erotic effort; I personally think it's a little long on fiction, little short on sex I've been tightening my technique with a wrench from all the great comments, thank you all!