Outlaw
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Mar 18, 2001
- Posts
- 254
Hey babe. Are you still here?
Any feedback from the poem from anyone else?
Bloody email still not working.
This is for you, anyway.
There's nowhere I would rather be than with you tonight,
Sharing the warmth of your body and bed,
Not alone on a eastbound train surrounded by cold night,
To be with you, holding you,
Finally touching you with my hands,
Drinking in the face I have seen only as coloured dots on my screen,
To swim in the oceans of your eyes,
And hear your voice on breaths warm from the mouth I have wanted to kiss for so long,
Not here, amongst tired businessmen and lonely women, soulless mannequins riding in the belly of this steel snake,
Not when I could be with you,
My ghost kisses across your face as you sleep without me.
Any feedback from the poem from anyone else?
Bloody email still not working.
This is for you, anyway.
There's nowhere I would rather be than with you tonight,
Sharing the warmth of your body and bed,
Not alone on a eastbound train surrounded by cold night,
To be with you, holding you,
Finally touching you with my hands,
Drinking in the face I have seen only as coloured dots on my screen,
To swim in the oceans of your eyes,
And hear your voice on breaths warm from the mouth I have wanted to kiss for so long,
Not here, amongst tired businessmen and lonely women, soulless mannequins riding in the belly of this steel snake,
Not when I could be with you,
My ghost kisses across your face as you sleep without me.
