crysede
coulda been a lady
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Since it's been over six months since I posted Ch. 1 of 'Demon Made Flesh', I don't know if you still remember the story, lol, but you wanted me to let you know when I finished the next chapter. I'm happy to say that, at the very least, Ch. 2 has been much more thoroughly proof read before being posted!
Demon Made Flesh Ch. 2 (here's a link to Ch. 1 in case anyone wants to look at it first)
I'd love to hear constructive critiques from anyone - and also would appreciate having any errors that still remain pointed out to me (what can I say, I'm a literary masochist
).
Demon Made Flesh Ch. 2 (here's a link to Ch. 1 in case anyone wants to look at it first)
I'd love to hear constructive critiques from anyone - and also would appreciate having any errors that still remain pointed out to me (what can I say, I'm a literary masochist
).
