Hey all here

[echoes_s]

I hope I didn't hurt anyone in the critic posting if you read it. It wasn't directed at one person at all, but just the situation.
I really have to work on my TOUGH SKIN
This computer stuff is still new, and it's like, omg we are getting to know each other, starting to relax, like home, liking everyone of you, all pretty cool people, and enjoying myself, even daring some to write more, some I still hold my breath with their writing, some I am finally understanding
(much hugs to Ange who showed me how to read a poem better, what to feel the most, I always tried to find the exact saying, feeling, like a jigsaw puzzle .
I don't like seeing anyone hurt, hurting, or fighting, knocking anyone down
I am finally understanding more of Eve's, and you never did answer me on the whips?
but I have always liked her...
awed again by her...like a teen-ager awed by a rock star feeling
not jumping all over the place, screaming, but speechless, blushing, with this warm glow.
God, I couldn't read Ange's poems at first, they were so beautiful, but she changed speaking even as she spoke more eloquently, beautiful, that last puff of cloud, lingering.
Her poems now...finally I understand and love.
I still haven't gone through and finished my favorite poems of 2003 from each poet. Half-way through the list about though.
That is one of the hardest things to do, to pick 3, and only in one year, when you see them grow so much from each year or month, you see the change.
That I am just learning this is amazing, more things to look for. Recognizing names more easily, reading...commenting more, I myself was even able to find a few constructive suggestions to give. I hoped they help or make you think. That was all I meant.
It's all that anyone merely means, simple suggestions.
This is an to me an erotic site to come to, to write poetry, light candles, kids gone, undress, music, alive...and it's a feeling
to dance...
and I know I forgot a few...Neo, Syn, Rybka, Icing, smithpeter, oxalis...doh, and probably more.
lol *looks up above and rereads*
that doesn't look too good...
anyway, I am cracking up and have no idea what I'm talking about
Sorry if I did.

 

[WickedEve]

I'm too sleepy to even comprehend my belly button lint (not that I have any!) So, I'll just say shut up Echoes and join us in the oval of friendship.

And are you starting to understand my poetry? Explain it to me. I post stuff and don't remember what it's about. Then someone--anyone--comes along and tells me it's about something truly profound. I just sit there and pick at my lint, and then I remember the poem was about the lint!

 

[echoes_s]

I'm too sleepy to even comprehend my belly button lint (not that I have any!) So, I'll just say shut up Echoes and join us in the oval of friendship.

And are you starting to understand my poetry? Explain it to me. I post stuff and don't remember what it's about. Then someone--anyone--comes along and tells me it's about something truly profound. I just sit there and pick at my lint, and then I remember the poem was about the lint!

LOL, I can never find lint in my belly button...always made me curious

...once in a while might find a small feather in there

or wax...hmmm
too much info

 

[tarablackwood22]

I'm glad to see you back echoes.....

......wax or no wax.....

.....and dancing bare again.

 

[Angeline]

I never understand why my poems garner the attention they do because I am in awe of so much I read here by others. I just write what I feel. Echoes, your work is so wonderful it astonishes me much of the time.

 

[echoes_s]

I never understand why my poems garner the attention they do because I am in awe of so much I read here by others. I just write what I feel. Echoes, your work is so wonderful it astonishes me much of the time.

Thanks Ange, just to see how much it has grown, because of everyone here helping.
Lol, I remember the first couple months here, how a lot has changed

...more typos now, than I had back then though ;0

especially the sudden passion thread...doh

and any punctuation...haha, good luck.
I took it completely out