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Heroine with Fake Boobs Concept (Honest Opinion)
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I'd read it jenny, get in touch if you'd like some feedback
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It's definitely an interesting concept, but what would you ultimately do with it? What's the point of conflict? The underlying storyline?
If you're gonna do a one-off, you may not need more than an interesting sex scene, but if you wanna do a mini-series centered around a boob-job, I'd spend some time fleshing out the details of the storyline.
If you're gonna do a one-off, you may not need more than an interesting sex scene, but if you wanna do a mini-series centered around a boob-job, I'd spend some time fleshing out the details of the storyline.
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Hey Jenny! My advice is to write what you want to write. If you feel like writing about a girl with implants, then you should do that. I don't think it would be particularly original, though. There was a newbie author not too long ago who also was all about how his character had implants. But anyway, don't write to be original, just write what comes naturally to you! Good luck!
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Well i have to kind of echo this opinion, myself im writing a pokemon style fanfiction but its got issues so im probably not going to publish it on this website, but its not going to stop me from writing it. But if you want other people like it you will have to answer a fundamental question "how are you going to make it a broad nteresting read?" Otherwise its like that country song with lyrics that go something like "everytime i make my mark someone paints the wall."
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Exactly. Fiction needs contention. Possibilities:
* She feels under-endowed and is saving up to afford a boob-job. What sordid indignities must she suffer to achieve her goal?
* She's contending with her school clique as to who gets the best boob-job. Must they call an outside lad to judge?
* She got a faulty boob-job. It started modestly but grew inexorably, till her chest rose halfway to lunar orbit. How: weird microbes infested the implants' saline solution, and fermented.
* She got the glorious boob-job and restyled her hair; nobody in her hometown recognizes her now. Does she lay waste to the local population?
Many supposed "story ideas" here are mere basic setups. Their stories can go almost anywhere. Think about results. How do you want your story to end?
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exhibitionist
(This part is true, I saw and heard it first-hand)
When a lady I know had set a date for her boob job, several guys asked to see the "before and after" view. For a select few, she did give them about a 10-second long flash. Many women saw, but only a few guys got to. It wasn't sexy, it was in front of her husband, flashing to these guys with their wives right there as well, and she had everyone's permission, and the women made a point about pointing out the incisions.
After another lady got implants, she let a few guys feel her up less than a week after surgery. With the inflammation and what felt like a stainless steel bra, it was anti-clamactic. It's still mentally sexy to grope a pretty lady's breasts, even if physically it felt like holding two softballs through a shirt.
(This part is for the Story idea)
Before the lady gets implants, since guys were always trying to take a peek down her shirt, she decides that even though her breasts are smaller, she will let them look as much as they want. She goes as far as intentionally not wearing a bra so she can enjoy providing a show, and the men's reactions get her turned on. Maybe a few of these times she straight up asks guys if they like her small boobs and offers to let them see and feel them.
Many women associate some of their self-worth and personal image by the size of their boobs, and women that aren't naturally gifted in that area can sometimes feel like less of a woman (all of which is mental thanks to society, and totally bullshit). Or they can think they aren't desireable, and they have little to no interest in showing off. The lady in your story might feel that way as well, so when the men are increasingly excited over her showing off, she is empowered.
After the boob job, her spirits are higher than the doctor's bill, and she can't wait until she's properly healed so she can flaunt her new chest. Remembering how much she enjoyed flashing her small(er) boobs, she continues to do it. With her appendages changing her posture and her confused muscle memory for where and how her body moves, she more frequently than ever rubs her boobs all over guys' arms and torso, and that keeps her turned on so much that she now begins doing it on purpose. It's even better when she can grope a man with her boobs, then let him get a good peek later.
(This part is true, I saw and heard it first-hand)
When a lady I know had set a date for her boob job, several guys asked to see the "before and after" view. For a select few, she did give them about a 10-second long flash. Many women saw, but only a few guys got to. It wasn't sexy, it was in front of her husband, flashing to these guys with their wives right there as well, and she had everyone's permission, and the women made a point about pointing out the incisions.
After another lady got implants, she let a few guys feel her up less than a week after surgery. With the inflammation and what felt like a stainless steel bra, it was anti-clamactic. It's still mentally sexy to grope a pretty lady's breasts, even if physically it felt like holding two softballs through a shirt.
(This part is for the Story idea)
Before the lady gets implants, since guys were always trying to take a peek down her shirt, she decides that even though her breasts are smaller, she will let them look as much as they want. She goes as far as intentionally not wearing a bra so she can enjoy providing a show, and the men's reactions get her turned on. Maybe a few of these times she straight up asks guys if they like her small boobs and offers to let them see and feel them.
Many women associate some of their self-worth and personal image by the size of their boobs, and women that aren't naturally gifted in that area can sometimes feel like less of a woman (all of which is mental thanks to society, and totally bullshit). Or they can think they aren't desireable, and they have little to no interest in showing off. The lady in your story might feel that way as well, so when the men are increasingly excited over her showing off, she is empowered.
After the boob job, her spirits are higher than the doctor's bill, and she can't wait until she's properly healed so she can flaunt her new chest. Remembering how much she enjoyed flashing her small(er) boobs, she continues to do it. With her appendages changing her posture and her confused muscle memory for where and how her body moves, she more frequently than ever rubs her boobs all over guys' arms and torso, and that keeps her turned on so much that she now begins doing it on purpose. It's even better when she can grope a man with her boobs, then let him get a good peek later.
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jennyanders83
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Thanks to all those who've commented on my thread so far. Some other newbie beat me to it, damn! Honestly I've been looking and couldn't find one story that mentioned or featured a girl with implants. Does anyone know what the story was called or know of others like it. I don't want to write something that's close to another writers work.
Some really great story ideas, lots to think about.
I did think, and I might be wrong, that it might put some readers off. Just a quick google and you can see a lot of people have some pretty negative ideas about breast implants. Thanks again to all those who've shared their ideas and opinions so far. It really is so interesting and a great help. X
Some really great story ideas, lots to think about.
I did think, and I might be wrong, that it might put some readers off. Just a quick google and you can see a lot of people have some pretty negative ideas about breast implants. Thanks again to all those who've shared their ideas and opinions so far. It really is so interesting and a great help. X
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Since you asked, I was thinking of this guy...
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3477220&page=submissions
But my advice would be not to focus too much on what you don't want to write, and more on what you do want to write.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3477220&page=submissions
But my advice would be not to focus too much on what you don't want to write, and more on what you do want to write.
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Write what you want, it won't be a duplicate of someone else's work. There will always be things that some people don't like, but so what? Is a boob job any more or less kinky than having a urine fetish?
There are tons of stories that are similar (ex: men enjoying when their wife screws another man), so who cares about more breast-centric stories?
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I'd say this. If you find fake boobs theme hot - write it. If you are just trying to find a new angle - then don't. After all, I bet that fake boobs is not the only theme that is neglected in Erotica, and, personally, I think that's for a reason. People generally prefer natural boobs - both men and women.
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Was J.K. Rowling the first person to write a story about wizard schools? Did Stephen King invent the scary ass clown?
No. The reality is that there is no such thing as an original story idea. What makes a story "original" is how it is written, not the concept behind it. Don't obsess over trying to find a story that's never been done before. Spoiler Alert: You'll lose that battle. Instead, write the kinds of stories you'd want to read and through diligent practice and gracious acceptance of constructive criticism, get better. Eventually, you'll create something that's uniquely "you" and damn good at that. Good luck and more importantly, have fun. The best part of writing is that there are no rules.
