Here is a weird fantasy idea I couldn't make work....

Chimney Sweep

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The idea is that a man has a magical penis - it transforms into what his partner most desires; the perfect dick for that woman.

Interesting twists:
-she really wants a woman (repressed lesbian urge)
-she really wants a black man
-two girls at once means 2 dicks, right? what happens at an orgy?
-she's really into pain and wants a stupid-big dick
-she's into bestiality and wants...something very strange?
-a hermaphrodite wants a dick and a vagina?

I dunno. I started a few items but they all got very strange very quickly and I couldn't do much with it. Free ideas are worth what you pay for 'em, right? ;)
 
Chimney it didn't work because you rather need to pick one or two things to have in the story.

Could even be a serial story. ;)

So pick one or two things to put in and it should work. Although for the orgy part, maybe not a lot of organs, but one that keeps going and going and I am so seeing the Energizer bunny now. :nana:

Thought, not sure if you want to do it this way, but perhaps the organ can change everything about him, so the woman who wants a black man gets a black man, the woman who wants a woman but doesn't know it gets a hermaphrodite, or perhaps a she-male, the orgy part still remains the Energizer bunny, not really sure why. :nana:

Two woman getting two organs is possible, I heard about a certain video where a guy with two does a threesome with two woman, never seen it myself, but I have heard about it. Not sure I would enjoy the way it would have to be done, but I assume some like it. You actually forgot one thing, the 2 woman part reminded me, suppose a woman wants one guy and both areas filled. ;)
 
it probably should be a series of stories, to my way of thinking. i'd recommend starting w/ how did this guy gain this ability and either make him a pick-up artist or a guy who's involved/married. you could tie this into BDSM themes or a way of living out a loving wives story w/out actually going the cuckold route at all.

ed
 
silverwhisper said:
it probably should be a series of stories, to my way of thinking. i'd recommend starting w/ how did this guy gain this ability and either make him a pick-up artist or a guy who's involved/married. you could tie this into BDSM themes or a way of living out a loving wives story w/out actually going the cuckold route at all.

ed

I'm not much into BDSM. I'm not sure I could even get close to realistic down that path. No experience, no desire.

I had envisioned it as a series of stories, or perhaps shortened "scenes" tied togetehr in a single narrative. I'm not sure the "origin story" is appropriate in this context - it's obviously wild fiction so any attempt at justifying it just adds to the list of this you need to accept for the story to work.

I have given up on the idea. I don't think I can make it work. If I can't do it well then I don't want to half-ass it (I think a bunch of my stuff might be half-assed already, so I REALLY don't want to do it quarter-assed!) I was throwing it out there in case a better and more experienced writer could use it. I could see this idea done well, I just can't do it myself.
 
Chimney Sweep said:
I'm not much into BDSM. I'm not sure I could even get close to realistic down that path. No experience, no desire. ...
Why would that stop you?

My bet is very few of the writers here have direct experience of their topics, and I'm sure it helps the writing quality to be disinterested in the theme. We have all read stories where the spelling and grammar go crazy in the hot bits, because the author was over-excited when (s)he wrote them, and gets hot every time (s)he tries to edit.

I make my living writing hard BDSM and yet I have never even spanked someone in RL, nor wanted to do so.
 
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