"Her Son, Her Slave"

MotherloverSon

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I've written a few chapters of a mother-son story, with traces of fem-dom, and I'll probably write a couple more. But I have another idea kicking around in my head and I'm wondering what people would think about it. This is probably closer to a story outline than a story idea, but please indulge me.

After college, Tracey discovered that she had a talent for domination, and began a side gig as a dominatrix. Most of her clients were rich older men, but one day, she met Chris, a man her own age. Chris really didn't have the money to hire her, but he was so sweet and shy, Tracey gave him a cut rate. He turned out to be a wonderful submissive and Tracey found great pleasure in helping him to overcome the shame he felt about his desires. One day, to her great surprise, Tracey realized she was falling for him. She asked him out. They hit it off.

25 years later.....

Chris and Tracey are a happy couple in suburbia. They both have successful careers and are respected people in their community. Their son, Dennis, is an amiable young man who has just graduated from college.

BUT Chris and Tracey haven't abandoned their kinky sides. They are in a FLR where she makes the rules. To the outside, they appear to be just the couple next door., maybe one where the wife wears the pants. But Tracey still takes on a client now and then. She is free to take lovers, though she is usually happy just with Chris. Whenever they are alone, Chris worships Tracey as a goddess and she punishes him like a bad little boy. They had a secret collaring ceremony where Chris pledged his eternal obedience.

Once Dennis went off to college, they were able to let their freak flag fly, engaging in all kinds of kinky stuff. Dennis seemed happy, especially since he had a ball-busting girlfriend, Kara, who kept him in line. But after college, he moved in with a buddy who had all manner of self-destructive habits. After a year of living with him, Dennis had lost his job, smashed up his car, and become a borderline alcoholic. The final straw came when Dennis's roommate left without paying his share of the rent and having taken many of Dennis's possessions.

So Dennis came back home with his tail between his legs. A few days after Dennis moved back in, Chris and Tracey sat him down for a conversation. For the first time, Dennis learned the truth about his parents' relationship. Tracey informs him that he will now be included in their FLR. She tells him is a talented and attractive boy but weak, and he should not be making his own decisions.

To his surprise, Dennis accepts becoming his mother's slave and even enjoys it.....

So anyway....

What do people think about this story idea? I know that Momcest and fem-dom are both niche categories.

What sort of kinky things should Tracey and Chris be into?

I want Dennis to eventually have sex with his mother. How should that be introduced? Tracey and Chris have a fine sex life. Chris may be submissive, but that doesn't mean he can't fuck.

What should the relationship between Chris and Dennis be, once they are slaves together? Will they be jealous of each other? Or should Chris take a mentoring role in teaching Dennis the joys of servitude?
 
I hate to give an annoying answer, but what happens in your story is based on the personalities of your characters. You can try to plot out what turns YOU on particularly or what you think would turn your Audience on the most, but that might make the story feel a bit forced.
 
Ha! True. I'll have to work out their personalities. Tracey would be a Dominant Woman With A Heart of Gold: she cares about both Chris and Dennis, and believes that being slaves is the best thing for both of them. I'd have to think more about what motivates Chris and Dennis.
 
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