"Her Brother's Giant Cock" - Unclear sections?

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This is about the story Her Brother's Giant Cock, which I am a big fan of and have posted about here before. I wanted to get some insight from others about what you think some of the parts of the story mean. The author makes a number of small spelling and grammatical errors too, which confuses the situation more. Try to have a little fun with it and figure out what would work well here, rather than "the author forgot/screwed up."

It's a great story of course, my favorite, so feel free to discuss any part of it, but there's a few I'm wondering about.

"Just studying ... and doing some pushups," he said, appearing to cover up something.
When I first read this I thought he was actually hiding something, like on his desk, but then on later reads realized it probably refers to him being evasive with his words. But then a friend read it and she said it sounded like her was actually hiding something.


He muttered, "It works," under his breath. Then he smiled anxiously and let her grab the towel from around his waist.
"Smiled anxiously" - is this an excited anxious or a nervous anxious? Anxious is an ambiguous word that can mean the opposite of itself, and the either one could be valid in the context. I lean a little towards excited, though.


"Nn ... Okay, I'll teach you," she agreed, her brain clouded by wanton sexual fantasies.
Do you think that "Nn ..." is a cut off "no" or just an "nnn" thinking sound?


"No! Not like that - like this," and she took off her blouse, bra and skirt. She brought his hands up to her breasts, holding them there and told him to gently rub and massage.
She strips mostly naked, and then gives him a handjob.
He continued ejaculating for what seemed like a full minute. Cum began to drip onto her blouse and run down her hands as she massaged him, still cumming herself.
She started to unbutton her splattered blouse.
Then afterwards she's removing her blouse. It's easy to say the author forgot, but any other explanations?


"First, I need to know about eating pussy. Tell me what to do." Her heart began to beat very fast as she explained the particulars to him.
This confirmed it for Angela. His semen and saliva seemed to trigger orgasms all by themselves. Though she still wanted to feel his giant cock inside, she was almost grateful that he was finished with her for the evening. Something in that stuff he used had turned him into an orgasm machine.

"No, just suck it," he said, standing there wearing only a t-shirt, his massive organ limp and swaying. "I need you to give me a blowjob so I know how it feels." It was only a week later and his cock was clearly longer and thicker.
And just as soon as she swallowed she began to cum herself - even more forcefully than before.
When she blows him, is that the same day that he eats her out? Does the "First, I need to.." imply he wants the blowjob afterwards? Or that he's drawing out them fucking? It mostly seems to say they are different times, but the wording of it all is funny. Is she cumming more forcefully than the oral? On top of all that, what horny teenage guy waits an extra week to get a blowjob? Haha.


"Mmmh," She mouthed, looking up at him after loving his cock for a while. Don't you want to cum for me ... Hmm?"
Do you think "Don't you want to cum for me" missing the starting quote is just a mistake, or means that she's mumbling all this with a full mouth, so you can't really understand her.


When their mother was out, he would have her "help" him in the bathroom.
With their mother still sleeping he would finish off her loving attention with a gushing ejaculation.
Their dad is never mentioned, single mom?


It occurred to her use a silk scarf to tie it to his thigh. This created a long bulge reaching from his crotch toward his knee, but looser slacks helped hide it.
Wendy could see the silk scarf around his left thigh from behind and thought it looked rugged, stylish, sexy. Wearing only his wife-beater T-shirt and the scarf, Clark turned around and Wendy saw his giant organ for the first time, tied to his leg like a gun in a holster.
She ran her palm over the scarf, along the length of his cock.
In what way was his penis tied to the leg? Tied using a bunched up scarf (like a rope) or spread out and flat, almost like boxerbrief legs.


Of course, he'd been accompanying female classmates home almost every day for the past two or three weeks!
Her young vagina was warm and slippery; gripping his cock in a tight, velvety glove that felt better than any mouth he'd had his cock in.
Is this the first time he's had sex? He's been hooking up with classmates, has it only been blowjobs? Did he wait for a crazy threesome before he finally fucks someone?


"Yes, I'd like to get fucked like that again. My God! You're a machine - An orgasm machine! How many times does a divorced, dance-teacher mom get to have supernatural sex? Umm, How about I get a room at the Hilton for Friday night? Meet me in the lobby at 7:00?"
Why the hotel now? Is she worried about the neighbors hearing all the noise they make?


Clark lost again and removed the boxers, his last piece of clothing.
Where's the scarf?


"Climb up here," Clark said to Mrs. Dean, holding his cock. She straddled Clark's lap facing away from him and with difficulty began to sit down on his huge erection, slowly sliding it into her wet cunt. She planted her feet on the floor on either side of his outstretched legs and began bending and straightening her knees, fucking herself on the giant cock.
How are Clark and Mrs Dean positioned? Is Clark laying on the floor or sitting in a chair?


"What do you want, Angie?" he asked, staring into her eyes.

"Fuck me."

"You want your brother to fuck you?"

"Yes, brother dear, fuck me!" and Clark thrust hard. Angie gasped as his cock drove into her. Clark watched her face contort with pleasure and pain.
I get the impression he's enjoying a degrading and painful nature of sex with Angela, compared to how gentle he was with Wendy and her mother.


Thoughts anyone? Any other sections from the story that you think are ambiguous?
 
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