Help!

[loquere]

So I stated the story for the Valentines contest a while ago. However I just finished it. Deadlines in a few hours.

CAN SOMEONE GIVE IT A QUICK READ OVER FOR PUNCTUATION? PLEASE?????

 

[LadyVer]

Good luck, loquere ,with the contest!

 

[JosephWrites]

See IM.

 

[glynndah]

So I stated the story for the Valentines contest a while ago. However I just finished it. Deadlines in a few hours.

CAN SOMEONE GIVE IT A QUICK READ OVER FOR PUNCTUATION? PLEASE?????

Sure.

 

[loquere]

Yup!!

 

[mynameisben]

yuh huh

 

[NaokoSmith]

Good luck, lucky loquere!

I was somebody's lucky charm on Facebook today so I hope I'm yours too. (I never got called that before! )