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[Sararamslut]

Chapter two of my story "Daddy, I Know You Want To" have been rejected 3 times. I have the same editor as for chapter 1. We both cant find any problems. I have NO idea why it got rejected. Anyone likes to help????

 

[slyc_willie]

Chapter two of my story "Daddy, I Know You Want To" have been rejected 3 times. I have the same editor as for chapter 1. We both cant find any problems. I have NO idea why it got rejected. Anyone likes to help????

First off, though it gets less traffic, but the Story Feedback dforum might be a better place to put this.

Secondly, there are three main things that would make Lit reject a story: Underaged -- or even the hint if underaged -- sexual activity (which, for Literotica, means charcters under the age of 18 involved in any kind of sexual situation, including voyeurism), beastiality, or really bad grammar.

If you have had this story editted three times, I would rule out grammar (unless your editor really doesn't know what the English language entails). That leaves underaged sex and beastiality.

Are there any parts in your story that might indicate sex before the age of consent? Or sex with animals?

 

[damppanties]

Chapter two of my story "Daddy, I Know You Want To" have been rejected 3 times. I have the same editor as for chapter 1. We both cant find any problems. I have NO idea why it got rejected. Anyone likes to help????

From what I know, you should be able to know the reason for rejection in the link that says 'rejected' next to your story on the submissions page. Someone will correct me if I'm wrong, but as far as I know, that's how it works. Try clicking on the link and tell us what you see?

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Waiting for you to try dampy's suggestion, I had a quick look at your first story.

There seems no problem with ages, length or bestiality. The grammar is not perfect and could do with better editing, but there are a lot worse efforts posted.

The only thing that bothered me was the stuff about the internet site with a daughter being tied to a bed and raped. If you have got something like this in part 2, it might be why you were rejected. In Incest you need to be very clear that everything is completely consensual.

 

[Sararamslut]

From what I know, you should be able to know the reason for rejection in the link that says 'rejected' next to your story on the submissions page. Someone will correct me if I'm wrong, but as far as I know, that's how it works. Try clicking on the link and tell us what you see?

Dear Writer,

Thank you for your submission to Literotica. We appreciate the time and effort you've taken to write a story and submit it to our site. However, we've found that we cannot post your submission in its current form. The checklist below may help you in re-examining your manuscript.


Was there an underage (under 18 years old) sexual relationship in my story?
Please feel free to re-submit the story after a Volunteer Editor has examined it, or after you've made revisions. You can find a list of Volunteer Editors here.

Please consult our Writer's Resources section and make sure you read our submission guidelines:

If you have any questions on these, please let us know.


Thanks for your time, and look forward to reading you again!

Laurel & Manu
Literotica.Com

 

[Vermilion]

Dear Writer,

Thank you for your submission to Literotica. We appreciate the time and effort you've taken to write a story and submit it to our site. However, we've found that we cannot post your submission in its current form. The checklist below may help you in re-examining your manuscript.


Was there an underage (under 18 years old) sexual relationship in my story?
Please feel free to re-submit the story after a Volunteer Editor has examined it, or after you've made revisions. You can find a list of Volunteer Editors here.

Please consult our Writer's Resources section and make sure you read our submission guidelines:

If you have any questions on these, please let us know.


Thanks for your time, and look forward to reading you again!

Laurel & Manu
Literotica.Com

That basically means that the editor thinks there *is* underage sex in your story. Either go over it carefully and remove any reference to under 18 years olds having genitalia and any kind of sexual thought OR, if you're certain there is no underage sex of any kind in your story, but there may be something that's being misread, then put a disclaimer at the top of your story along the lines of "All characters [involved in sex] in this story are of or above the legal age of consent"