Help !!!!!

[Nobody Special's wife]

I really need help in my story could some one give some kind of Ideas on what to do .....here is little part of my story

She sits there by the cliff watching the sea. Waiting for her man to set her free from her pain. She has all the needs and wants and yet she has to wait for her man. For his ship to come in to port.


The Painter watches this angel by the cliffs and paints her every expression her longs her wants her needs. He feels him self-get hard. And masturbates his needing flesh. Because he wants this angel like No other woman he has had before.


She gets up its going to be dark she say" to her self.
As she starts to walk home she sees a man painting.

She walks up to him...Hello she says". Painter says" Hello my name is Chase. May I ask who you are?" She says" Hello my name is Lisa. What are you painting?


Oh! Chase says". Well as he try's to hide his hard on. I'm painting you! I say you by the cliffs and I just couldn't help my self.

Lisa looks at him and smiles that is all right I don't mind would you like to have some coffee with me?

Chase No I'm sorry I have to get going. . But I will meet you here tomorrow is that all right.

Lisa smiles and says that would be just fine. I will see you tomorrow..

 

[Ray Dario]

I'll tell you what I do when I write. This might work for you or it might not. When I write stories I try not to influence the characters at first, I let them do what seems natural and then I write about it. I know that sounds weird or something, but if I can picture the scene in my mind and then just let my immagination run wild with it I find that the characters react more naturally than if I set out thinking "Okay I want this character to react this way" or "I want this character to do this." So I picture the scene and the external events I want to shape the story and then let the characters flow. Often times this takes me places I could never have dreamed up otherwise.

It is only after the firt write of the story that I go back and begin fixing the story. I then do minor adjustments to make the story flow a little better, make sure I haven't made any glaring editorial errors, (ie. saying a character was wearing a skirt and then having her remove her pants) and so on.

If you are asking where to go from with this story then, to me, the obvious continuation would be to have her meet the man the next night and they talk and laugh and go back to his/her place for a night cap that turns into more. By the time her long lost hubby returns from the sea he finds that his love is more independant but still in love with him and they live happily ever after.

But that is only a single direction. You have a good concept and you can take it any direction you want. You could have the woman be Dominant(sp) or submissive, you could have her fall in love with her artist, you could make the artist a serial killer, you could make her a serial killer, you could make her a slut, you could make her a saint, incapable of doing anything but loving everyone.

The skys the limit, let your imagination flow and you will find that you have written a good story. Then send it to a volunteer editor and take their advice and you will find that you have written a great story!

I hope that I have helped you in some way. Good luck and keep writing!

Ray
Ever wonder why in the search for intelligent life all the satalites are pointing away from earth?

 

[Nobody Special]

thank you Ray That was very nice of you now if I can just get my imageination to kick hehe

THE WIFE



DAmn the husband of mine anyhow!!! oopps lol