Help!!!

[KillerMuffin]

Okay, I decided to refinish what was a complete story because the ending sucked. It sucked mostly because it wasn't an ending. There's just a problem that's cropped up and I'm unsure what might be the most realistic method to deal with it.

This is a mild D/s relationship. What I mean by mild is that neither of them really connect themselves to BDSM or any of the usual D/s roles. He's dominant and she's submissive to please him. It would be her first sort of D/s relationship. It's also perfectly natural for her to treat him with the usual D/s respect--calling him sir and deferring to his wishes--because he's a major and she's a private.

Anyway, the extended ending has them in trouble with the Army. It's illegal for a major and a private in the same chain of command to fraternize. In the face of discovery, he does the push her away to protect her routine by telling her that he just used her. So now we have a relationship with broken trust.

The problem: how does a good dom repair that trust? Not just the sorts of things and male~female does. This is a porno story so sex is involved. There is no physical pain involved. It's more of a withholding orgasm/sex domination.

 

[wolf2002]

I am a fan of your work so I'd love to give it a shot...

A good Dom would be able to read his sub's deepest emotions and direct them... he understands her, perhaps even better than she understands herself... he would use his dominant spirit to reel her back in, to seduce her with soft but firm touch...

I can imagine a scene in which your characters meet again, after having split up... my suggestion is that you let her go through a serie of emotions, which he all handles with grace... first nonchalant, cool, then angry, maybe she even starts to fight him... he just holds her arms and makes her look at him.... the scene ends up in a mock rape, in which she pretends to struggle, but actually really wants him... and he knows that...

In the last fase, she starts to cry... he kisses her tears away... they both know their relation is deeper now. She has submitted to him once again, he has proven that he really is the Dom she needs...

Hope to have been of any help...


Wolf

 

[niteshade]

I can't say that I really know what to tell you about that... the only stuff I am coming up with is all very cheesy. However, I wish you luck and look forward to reading the finished product.

 

[MissTaken]

It seems also, that there may have to be resolution to the issue of being in the military.

Perhaps, one or the other of them leaves?

I like your scenario, wolf.