Help writing Mother/Son Taboo

secondsamuel

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Maybe this is the wrong thread, but I have had some trouble getting Mother/Son stories approved. Normally I tend to write Daddy/Daughter stories, but a few really good authors have inspired me to do the inverse. However, twice my stories have been rejected as age play simply for dialogue (of course everyone is 18 and up). So I am also looking for an editor.

But I am wondering about the language and if there is not a double standard I need to be aware of (as I certainly can't change it). Specifically, does using Mommy sounds more youthful than saying Daddy? I guess I have the same question about a lot of other terms I have taken for granted in taboo, such as being Daddy's girl opposed to Mommy's boy.

Or maybe there is something I'm missing in my story. I wrote it based on fantasy role play between my wife and I involved Mother/Son talk and water sports. If anyone is interested, I would happy to hear some thoughts as I am new the genre.

I've always appreciated Literotica's standards, but I do like some terms like Mommy, penis, and pee. I am not very familiar with age play or into it. Where is the line between submissive dialogue and age play?

Thanks,

Sam
 
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