Help with writing a taboo mom/son sequel

[BigBootyMomLucia]

Forgive me if this is not the best place to ask for help.

I am very new to story writing and English is not my first language so I make mistakes some times.

I would like some help with this (grammar etc.), also with narrating from the son's perspective / ideas. Maybe that is too much to ask for!

Hoping to be 3.000 words or so

Thank you

 

[Thedoc28]

Would love to help. I'm John.

 

[Hipshot1554]

Forgive me if this is not the best place to ask for help.

I am very new to story writing and English is not my first language so I make mistakes some times.

I would like some help with this (grammar etc.), also with narrating from the son's perspective / ideas. Maybe that is too much to ask for!

Hoping to be 3.000 words or so

Thank you

Interesting. Have you submitted it?