Help with Story Idea

[Babydoll5272]

Helllo everyone I have submitted two chapters of a story I am workin on called "Father Donelly" in a nut shell it is about a recently divorced woman who becomes a secetary at a Catholic church. She is soon working on a project with the assistant Priest and soon their passion overcomes them and they make love. Afterwards the assistant priest avoids the secetary at all costs because he is feeling guilty due to the morality issue and decides to go to South Africa to help a relief effort there. Ok now from this point my story could take on many diffrent roles and was wanting to get some good ideas from all of you!


thanks in advance for the help!
DOLL

 

[mtnman802]

Father Connelley

How about taking your story down two different roads. The first road could be her further desire for him, and acting out her pleasures with the alter boy.

In turn, he could find some delightful lady in South Africa, and having just lost his virginity, further wanting the pleasures of a woman.

Just a thought