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help with making this part of the story erotic
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fifty5
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Think hard about the situation.
Put yourself in his (her) situation.
"He slid his hands under her shirt. Felt his hands against the skin of her midriff. Felt her thrill to his touch. Moved his hands slowly upwards. ..."
And so on.
Writing a good story has a lot in common with actually doing the stuff. Think about physical detail and actually doing it - then write that down.
Whichever gender you are, think a masturbation fantasy. Just slowly...
If you do, then if it works for you, it'll work for at least some readers.
Go for it, kid!
Carl East
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There literally are so many ways to remove that shirt, I hardly know where to begin. But...
"When she kissed me I placed my hand on her cheek, and responded with a soft stroke of her delicate skin. I placed my other hand onto her waist, and slowly lifted the tee shirt she was wearing. She moaned softly as I gently moved my hand up to cup her right breast, and kissed me harder as I squeezed it for the first time. I then brought my other hand down and lifted her shirt up and over her bust, before unclasping the bra she wore and allowing it to fall to the floor. Once it had, I leaned forward and started to lick and suck on her erect nipples. She then removed the shirt completely, not wanting anything to get in the way."
OR this...
"As I approached Carol with the drinks I tripped on the rug, and my coke went all over her. Talk about appologetic, I couldn't stop saying how sorry I was. She just laughed and asked for a towel, which I fetched straight away. I don't think I was ready for what she did next though, as she suddenly removed her tee shirt right in front of me and began to dry herself off."
Or maybe this...
"We were both so hot for one another when we reached my apartment, for no sooner had I closed the door behind us than we were kissing and pulling at each others clothes. I don't think I've ever been undressed so quickly in my entire life. And when it came to removing her tee shirt she shot her hands straight up and allowed me to slip it off within a second, before unclasping her bra and throwing it to the floor."
I could go on, but you get the point.
Carl
"When she kissed me I placed my hand on her cheek, and responded with a soft stroke of her delicate skin. I placed my other hand onto her waist, and slowly lifted the tee shirt she was wearing. She moaned softly as I gently moved my hand up to cup her right breast, and kissed me harder as I squeezed it for the first time. I then brought my other hand down and lifted her shirt up and over her bust, before unclasping the bra she wore and allowing it to fall to the floor. Once it had, I leaned forward and started to lick and suck on her erect nipples. She then removed the shirt completely, not wanting anything to get in the way."
OR this...
"As I approached Carol with the drinks I tripped on the rug, and my coke went all over her. Talk about appologetic, I couldn't stop saying how sorry I was. She just laughed and asked for a towel, which I fetched straight away. I don't think I was ready for what she did next though, as she suddenly removed her tee shirt right in front of me and began to dry herself off."
Or maybe this...
"We were both so hot for one another when we reached my apartment, for no sooner had I closed the door behind us than we were kissing and pulling at each others clothes. I don't think I've ever been undressed so quickly in my entire life. And when it came to removing her tee shirt she shot her hands straight up and allowed me to slip it off within a second, before unclasping her bra and throwing it to the floor."
I could go on, but you get the point.
Carl
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