Help with incest story (opinions requested)

[TheOtherTeacher]

Sorry if this is the wrong place for the question. It doesn't seem to fit in Author's hangout or story ideas.

I need to know how to progress my incest story.
Basic premise - woman is stuck in virtual reality with a VR copy of her family. To exit, she must have sex with all of them.

The family are - mum, dad, older sister, inexperienced younger brother. (Plus female main character)

I want to condense the 4 family members into 3 sex scenes. So someone has to share (aka threesome) plus I have to decide the order.

I want to end on either the brother or father, because the moment he "finishes" the game will exit.

What order/pairing seems most interesting to you?

Brother, sister, join parents for a threesome?
Sister & mother, brother, dad?
Sister & dad, mum, brother?

A different combo?

(I'd be willing to rewrite and make brother into 2 twin brothers if you think that would work well)

All suggestions gratefully received!

 

[curioustxn]

For the game to end, does she have to have sex in virtual reality, or reality?

 

[verdantviridity]

Of the offered orders/combinations, the "Sister & mother, brother, dad" seems enticing.

I'll offer a possible order as food for thought: sister & brother, mother, dad

How important is the threesome aspect? I imagine it's high on the priority list, but I am a little curious as to why you want to condense the 4 characters into 3 scenes. There's no wrong answer but just wanted to pick your brain.

 

[curioustxn]

Sorry if this is the wrong place for the question. It doesn't seem to fit in Author's hangout or story ideas.

I need to know how to progress my incest story.
Basic premise - woman is stuck in virtual reality with a VR copy of her family. To exit, she must have sex with all of them.

The family are - mum, dad, older sister, inexperienced younger brother. (Plus female main character)

I want to condense the 4 family members into 3 sex scenes. So someone has to share (aka threesome) plus I have to decide the order.

I want to end on either the brother or father, because the moment he "finishes" the game will exit.

What order/pairing seems most interesting to you?

Brother, sister, join parents for a threesome?
Sister & mother, brother, dad?
Sister & dad, mum, brother?

A different combo?

(I'd be willing to rewrite and make brother into 2 twin brothers if you think that would work well)

All suggestions gratefully received!

A possibility:
Instead of brother, sister, mom and dad, perhaps it's mom, dad, of legal age son and daughter? If you really want to get kinky.

Perhaps mom and daughter use her for sex first, (taking her to extreme orgasms), then dad fucks her while she simultaneously sucks her son.

Save the most taboo, and kinkiest sex act for the climax of the story. She should be exhausted when they are done with her.

Just my thoughts................

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

Of the offered orders/combinations, the "Sister & mother, brother, dad" seems enticing.

I'll offer a possible order as food for thought: sister & brother, mother, dad

How important is the threesome aspect? I imagine it's high on the priority list, but I am a little curious as to why you want to condense the 4 characters into 3 scenes. There's no wrong answer but just wanted to pick your brain.

Thanks for your answer!

I want the threesome aspect for two reasons. Firstly, to keep things interesting. Don't get me wrong, I love 2 character sex. But it's nice to spice things up with a threesome every now and again.

Secondly for the rhythm of the story. I didn't explain the whole story earlier, but before the female character has to commit incest, there is a male character who must do the same. He has sex with his mum in the kitchen, then his older sister (and his mum unexpectedly joins them to make it a threesome).
So I need to keep the same energy going.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

For the game to end, does she have to have sex in virtual reality, or reality?

The whole story happens in VR.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

Thanks for your replies. I've almost finished the story. I've gone for -
BJ for Dad, then a quicky with the younger brother, then a lesbian threesome with mother and sister. BUT the computer didn't count the BJ as sex, so she must go back and have penetrative sex with her dad. But during this scene the younger brother returns so she is spit roasted by her father and brother.

 

[verdantviridity]

Thanks for your replies. I've almost finished the story. I've gone for -
BJ for Dad, then a quicky with the younger brother, then a lesbian threesome with mother and sister. BUT the computer didn't count the BJ as sex, so she must go back and have penetrative sex with her dad. But during this scene the younger brother returns so she is spit roasted by her father and brother.

This is a good solution you landed on! Sounds interesting and I hope I catch it when you finally publish