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Hi! I was hpoing someone would be able to identify the following sotry for me. I got it a long time ago (3-4 years?), I don't think from this site. Either from www.eroticstories.com or storiesonline.net. The story is about a girl Joann (called 'Muff), her brother Philip, I believe their last name is Pansen. I have the first 5 chapters, but have no idea who the author is. Have tried the search function on this site but to no avail.
Any help would be appreciated. I am posting the begining of the 1st Chapter below. I will post more if it will help in recognizing the story. But it's a GREAT story and I really want to give credit to the author whoever he/she is.

Thanks!


"Chapter 1

Joann really enjoyed gym class, but it was a relief when it was over to take off
the Extra Support Sport Bra. Mom, as usual, had been correct that every girl
matured at a different time and it had just taken Joann a bit longer than most to do
so.

It had been the summer before this, Joann's senior year at ClearVale Senior
High School, when her figure had finally blossomed. Within a few weeks her
mostly flat chest had grown to a pair of 35C shapely mounds of sensitive woman
flesh. Her breasts appeared even more prominent on her 5'5" frame because her
avid participation in gymnastics and weight training kept her supple waist to a trim
23" and her now more mature hips at 33".

Her silky dark brown hair hung an inch or so below her shoulders. When not
practicing gymnastics she often wore it in a ponytail, which swung in time with
the swaying of her tight butt as she walked. Deep brown eyes, a small sensual
mouth and a slender oval face gave the teen-aged girl a combination of wide-eyed
innocence and at times the look of a wild wanton.

After gym class Joann had Advanced Biology. Since her figure had blossomed
she drew a great deal of attention as she walked down the school hall. Most of
the boys' heads and a number of the male teachers heads also turned and
followed her swaying tight ass.

At the door to the biology room two of her classmates Cal Remer and Scott
Taylor were waiting as usual. They partially blocked the doorway so that all the
girls entering had to pass between them. They made it appear that they were
talking or had their attention elsewhere, but each girl that entered the room got
bumped, goosed, or if the guys thought they could get away with it, fondled in
some manner."
 
No Luck?

Well, there is the entire first chapter:

Any help would be appreciated!

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Chapter 1

Joann really enjoyed gym class, but it was a relief when it was over to take off
the Extra Support Sport Bra. Mom, as usual, had been correct that every girl
matured at a different time and it had just taken Joann a bit longer than most to do
so.

It had been the summer before this, Joann's senior year at ClearVale Senior
High School, when her figure had finally blossomed. Within a few weeks her
mostly flat chest had grown to a pair of 35C shapely mounds of sensitive woman
flesh. Her breasts appeared even more prominent on her 5'5" frame because her
avid participation in gymnastics and weight training kept her supple waist to a trim
23" and her now more mature hips at 33".

Her silky dark brown hair hung an inch or so below her shoulders. When not
practicing gymnastics she often wore it in a ponytail, which swung in time with
the swaying of her tight butt as she walked. Deep brown eyes, a small sensual
mouth and a slender oval face gave the teen-aged girl a combination of wide-eyed
innocence and at times the look of a wild wanton.

After gym class Joann had Advanced Biology. Since her figure had blossomed
she drew a great deal of attention as she walked down the school hall. Most of
the boys' heads and a number of the male teachers heads also turned and
followed her swaying tight ass.

At the door to the biology room two of her classmates Cal Remer and Scott
Taylor were waiting as usual. They partially blocked the doorway so that all the
girls entering had to pass between them. They made it appear that they were
talking or had their attention elsewhere, but each girl that entered the room got
bumped, goosed, or if the guys thought they could get away with it, fondled in
some manner.

As Joann tried to enter Scott bumped into her side and Carl on the pretext of
helping her, reached out his hand and squeezed her breast. Joann elbowed him in
the stomach and for good measure kicked Scott in the ankle.

"Hands off degenerate. Try that again and you'll be in the Soprano section of
the choir".

This exchange got a laugh from all those who saw it, especially the girls.

After school was Gymnastic Club practice which Joann enjoyed every day.
That day, even though gymnastic team practice was a good work out, Joann
decided to do some weight training at home also. So instead of showering and
changing after practice, she threw on her coat and ran out to her car and drove
quickly home.

It looked as though no one else was home as Joann walked through the house
to her room. She dumped her schoolbooks and coat on her bed and stripped off
her sweaty leotard, panties, and bra. Again her breasts luxuriated in the release
from their tight confinement. They settled hardly at all. The weight training and
gymnastics kept her muscles in excellent shape and her twin mammary peaks
rode high on her chest.

She pulled on a pair of old, too small jean cutoffs that barely made it over her
hips and whose crotch was so narrow that it rode up high between her ass cheeks
and parted the lips of her pussy. A loose short tank top that barely covered her
tits completed her outfit. She headed for the basement workout room.

As she came to the weight room door she heard sounds inside, so quietly
padded closer and peeked into the room. Her 15 year old brother Philip had had
the same idea of an after school workout and he had gotten here first.

Though three years younger, Philip was already two inches taller than Joann,
His tousled sandy hair, deep blue eyes, cute face, and the dedicated work with the
weights he had gotten last Christmas made him a fine figure of a lad. Actually he
had quite a hunky body, even if he was only 15.

Apparently Philip had come from gym also and gotten comfortable because he
was wearing only a jockstrap. Joann admired her brother's muscular body and
was especially fascinated by his well-filled jockstrap. She had not seen many
cocks, but Philip's surely compared well in size with all of them. It was definitely
much larger than Greg Hanson's.

Greg had been her date for last springs' Junior Prom. He was an okay guy;
and last year before her body had filled out he was the only one to ask her to the
dance.

After the Prom dinner and dance, Joann and Greg had been invited to an
After Party at Jean Ordini's; but like many of the couples they had made a stop at
Pussy Park first. Pussy Park was a series of lanes and fields back in the State
Game Lands that was the favorite parking spot of the area kids.

Greg found a secluded spot back one of the lanes and pulled in under a tree
and turned the car off. Joann had done a bit of necking and groping before, but
tonight promised to be a bit more than that. When Greg slid across the seat and
put his arms around her and craned his neck forward for a kiss she met him with
her lips parted and welcomed his darting tongue deep into her mouth.

She felt a deep flush on her face that spread down her neck to her shoulders
as he pressed their heated kiss and moved his hands up to caress her shoulders.
The heat spread further and hotter down her arms and torso as Greg's hands slid
down over her smooth shoulders. His mouth left hers and he slowly trailed kisses
across her cheek and lightly nibbled on her ear and neck as his hands moved to
the top of her gown zipper and started to tug it down.

Joann hugged him tighter as she leaned slightly forward allowing him to pull
the zipper completely down. She sat back and Greg pulled her dress top down
leaving her naked from the waist up. Back then her breasts were only smallish
swellings, but her ultra sensitive nipples even then engorged like large erasers,
turgid with passion. Greg immediately dove forward and sucked one nipple and
breast into his mouth, gently tonguing and teasing the swollen nipple out even
further, as one hand came up to fondle and pinch the other boob.

This double assault caused fire to sweep from Joann's breasts throughout her
body and quickly kindle a bonfire between her thighs. She felt her vaginal lips
start to swell and her as yet virginal love tube begin lubricating. Her own hands
were stroking up and down his back as the assault on her tender tits kept on.
Greg lifted his lips back up to hers and their mouths locked as both his hands
squeezed and molded her pliant breasts. All thought was gone from Joann, just
raw sensation and lust controlled her hands as she pulled the jacket from Greg,
unbuttoned his shirt, and started to work on the zipper of his pants.

She moaned softly when his hand left her right breast, but she felt it quickly
settle on her knee and start to push her skirt up. Her hands were urgently
kneading the bulge she found under his zipper and she worked the opening wider
to get into his shorts.

Greg soon had her skirt bunched up high enough to get to her bare knee and
slid his hand up the inside of her leg pushing the dress with his arm. Joann let her
thighs spread apart to allow access to her already wet crotch. Both fumbling
fledglings jerked when Greg's hand reached the junction of Joann's soaked thighs.
He, in surprise at finding no obstacle to is probing fingers, because before leaving
the prom Joann had slipped into the Ladies Room and removed both pantyhose
and panties, hoping that things would progress this far; and she, as a male finger
abruptly slid in where only her own fingers had been before. Both jerked a second
time as Joann's hand found it's way into Greg's shorts and her fingers wrapped
around his stiff penis.

Both teens were too inexperienced, not to mention too excited to indulge in
much in the way of foreplay. There was a brief hilarious (for anyone watching)
Chinese fire drill as the semi-clad pair scrambled out of the front seat and into the
back; then more pulling and grunting as bodies were arranged and clothing
disarranged. Finally Joann got herself mostly reclining on the seat with her gown
pulled up around her waist and Greg lying between her splayed out legs.

There was even more maneuvering and huffing as the two virgins tried to get
the appropriate body parts aligned. Finally Greg managed to get the head of his
cock seated between Joann's puffy vaginal lips. Then more by accident than
planning pushed at just the right time and jammed the head of his swollen staff up
into Joann's receptive woman sheath. Both froze for an instant. Joann tried to
shift her legs a little to better accommodate the thick intruder into her body, but
Greg didn't notice or seem to care. He jerked his hips down and forward trying to
force all of his cock into her.

There was only a brief flair of pain as his intruding piston pushed deeper and
deeper into her passion swollen tissues. The breath whooshed from her lungs as a
final jab brought Greg's hips firmly up against Joann's cuntal mound. She had no
time to sort out separate feelings or sensations before Greg jerked his hips back,
drawing his now cunt juice coated prick nearly out of the newly fucked girl's
honey pot, then slammed forward again until their crotches slapped together. All
sensation was centered in Joann's clasping cunt. The quick stabs of the frenzied
boy's penis into her still sore woman canal sent shocks of lustful electricity
throughout her body.

Joann lifted her legs up around Greg's waist trying to get more pressure on her
clit, as he started a rapid pumping of his blood fattened sausage into her dripping
female hole. He hammered into her only a few times before a final lunge and
shudder signaled he had shot his load of cum juice into her. He cuddled her for a
few minutes and sucked on her tits, then started to get dressed mumbling about
getting to the party. Joann had not come and felt vaguely unfulfilled and very
disappointed that that was all there was. But she said nothing.

They had only gone out a couple more times before school was over for the
year and had screwed only once more. Joann had taken to rubbing her clit and
sticking a finger into her ever-horny pussy each evening. Then one Tuesday after
supper her Mom called up to her room that Greg was at the door. Joann pulled on
a tee shirt and a pair of shorts and ran down to greet him.

"Hi Joann", mumbled Greg. "I was wondering if you would like to go for a
walk, or something."

"Yeah, sure," smiled the pretty teen.

The two of them wandered hand and hand in the general direction of the
school and the park behind it. By unspoken agreement they strolled to the edge of
a small copse of trees and stood there making desultory small talk. Greg finally
put his arms around Joann's shoulders, pulled her to him and kissed her. His hands
stroked down her back and gripped her tight butt cheeks as his tongue probed
urgently into her mouth. Joann kissed back, her own tongue battling with his. Her
arms went around him and hugged his body tightly to hers. She ground her hips
against his and felt his penis rapidly hardening.

Greg broke the kiss long enough to fumble at the buttons and zippers of his
jeans and Joann's shorts. He pushed his pants down, then hers, and returned to
the fierce, sloppy kiss as he mashed his sex weapon against the hot girl's bare
stomach. Greg was a few inches taller than her so Joann finally broke the kiss
and turning around, dropped to her hands and knees. She looked back over her
shoulder and said, "Come on Greg. We can do it this way, no one will see."

The excited boy gazed a long moment at the hot ass of this beautiful female,
then dropped to his knees behind her and awkwardly shuffled between her legs.
After a bit of fumbling he succeeded in shoving his cock up her. It was over
quickly, just like in the car after the prom, but at least this time Joann managed a
weak orgasm. She had not seen Greg, except occasionally at school, again.

These thoughts quickly flashed through Joann's mind as she watched her
brother doing arm curls. Yes, his cock definitely looked bigger than Greg's. But
this was her brother she was ogling-- so she dragged her thoughts back to her
workout and bounced into the room.

"How's the bicep building biz, bro?" she quipped as she headed for the barbell
stand.

"Have to keep in shape to beat off all the women, Muff. You're looking pretty
good, how was practice?" returned her sweating sibling.

Joann put 103# on the bar ends and lay down on the bench to start her
presses. When she reached up to grasp the bar the short top pulled up almost
uncovering her nipples. The whole under slope of her breasts was exposed to
view. She grasped the bar and grunted with strain as she started her press.

"Hey dummy, you know better than that!" admonished her brother.

He laid down his hand weights and came to stand behind her head so he could
help with the weights in case she tired too quickly.

"The guys at school would never forgive me if I let you harm that magnificent
chest of yours. They enjoy watching your tits bounce too much," Philip grinned as
he watched his sister's straining bust.

"Names! I want names, darling brother," kidded Joann as she set the bar back
in place. "I've heard a couple things said about your bod as well-- in the girl's
locker room."

They traded places and as Philip got himself comfortable Joann added more
weights to the bar. At his 9th rep Philip was obviously straining.

"Ah-- Muff, watch close. I think I can get one more but may need a bit of
help."

He had the bar almost back to the stand rungs when his arms started to
tremble and shake. Joann tried to help from where she was at behind his head,
but couldn't get the right leverage. So she quickly jumped around to straddle his
chest and lift that way. Phil's arms gave out; but between them they managed to
angle the falling bar so it did not hit either of them. Joann's momentum caused her
to fall across her brother and the exertion pulled her top up to her armpits,
exposing her chest and the fully engorged nipples. One of those nipples ended up
pressed against her brother's lips.

As they lay still a moment, catching their breath, both gradually realized what
parts of their anatomies were situated where. Philip's lips slowly parted and his
tongue gently flicked at the nipple. This sent a thrill throughout Joann's body.
When his sister didn't move, Philip started to slowly suck on the still hardening
breast tip and his hands came up-- one to rest lightly on Joann's half bare butt
cheek and the other to grope for her other tit.

The suction only intensified the sensations firing throughout Joann's body. She
shifted her body to shove more mammary meat into her brother's mouth and allow
his hand access to her other breast.

There was only the sound of heavy breathing in the room. Philip sucked
harder and harder on the full-bodied woman flesh in his mouth as he pinched and
pulled on the other nipple. His other hand found it's way under the narrow strip
covering Joann's crotch and worked it's way down to tease at the bottom of her
steadily lubricating crack.

Joann spread her legs wider over her brother's hard chest allowing his finger
to slide up through her vaginal lips and sink into her by now dripping hole. The
intimate contact jolted them both out of their lustful haze. Joann jerked her upper
body back, popping her red and straining boob from Philip's mouth. She gazed
deeply into her brother's eyes and trying to keep the mood light, quipped, "Hey
bro, that finger is getting kind of personal, don't you think?"

"I know, Muff. We shouldn't be doing this," Philip said slowly. "But it feels so
good to hold you," he continued adding a second finger to the first inside his
sister's hole and easing them both deeper into her body. A low moan escaped
Joann's throat as her hips hunched down, the muscles of her love tunnel working
to draw the welcome intruders deeper inside.

Joann, again almost lost in a lust-induced trance, leaned down to kiss the loving
face of her little brother. Their tongues invaded each other's mouths and Phil's
hand went back to the breast it had been fondling. As the intensity of their kisses
grew Philip tried to slide a third finger into Joann's slippery pussy folds. The
discomfort of the stretching caused her to reach a hand down to pull his fingers
out. But in the fumbling, Joann's fingers found something more interesting. The
thrashing about when the barbell fell and the bodily squirming since had pulled
Philip's jockstrap awry. Joann's questing fingers found his hard cock. His loins
jumped when she wrapped her hand around the solid length of his rod. She pulled
and stroked on it, reveling in the feel of the satiny skin and bulbous head.

"Please, Muff, be careful or you'll make me shoot," pleaded Philip. "It feels so
good. Do you like this?" he asked as he slid his fingers in and out of her clasping
cunt.

"You should know I do," smiled Joann as she pumped her hips slowly onto his
fingers.

They stayed this way for a minute or so, slowly and lovingly masturbating
each other. Then Joann carefully stood up pulling her clinging vagina off her
brother's fingers. As Philip was about to protest, she slipped her shorts down over
her hips and lifting each leg took them completely off. As she skinned her tank
top up over her head, Philip quickly pulled his jockstrap down his legs and off.

"OK brother dear, let's do this right," Joann said as she positioned her still
dripping slit over Philip's rock hard man length. She slowly bent her knees to bring
her gaping nether lips to just touch the red top of his straining penis. Joann bit the
tip of her tongue in concentration as she gently worked the head of his large sex
tool into the entrance of her love canal.

The blunt tip of Philip's sex weapon parted the dripping lips of his sister's cunt.
Their mutual masturbation had already engorged her female flesh and had her
juices flowing at full flood.

"Muff, please-" Philip almost whimpered in his desire to feel more of her hot
clasping cunt. Joann lowered herself a bit more and felt the broad part of his cock
head wedge tightly at the entrance to her vagina. She slowly increased the
pressure until the fat pussy plunger popped past her love canal lips and into the
waiting woman flesh beyond.

"Uh, --um--oh yes," groaned Joann as her brother's thick penis started a slow
slide deeper into her body. She planted her hands on his shoulders and held
herself in place as she let the incredible sensations wash over her body and her
clinging womanhood adjust to the fat man-rod forcing itself inside.

The wild sensations were overloading Philip's nervous system. This was his
first time with a girl and the magnificence of his sister's body and the feel of her
tits in his hands, plus the over-powering liquid fire of her pussy slowly engulfing
his cock, sent him over the edge.

"Muff, Muff, - I'm coming, "he cried as he hunched his hips upward trying to
cram more of his flesh into her.

Though only the head of his cunt club was inside her, Joann felt the jets of
baby stuff hose the walls of her woman chamber sending her into waves of
overpowering orgasm also. Her cunt clamped hard on the delightful intruder that
was causing so much pleasure to her body. But her brother's cock had not been
very far inside her so her muscle spasms just pushed it out, --still spurting gobs of
come, that splashed up her stomach.

As the climax waves slowly let up on both of them, Philip looked into his
sister's eyes and sheepishly said, "Sorry. Sis, guess I'm not so hot at this, or
maybe too hot!"

Joann smiled lovingly at her brother and wrapped the fingers of one hand
around the slimy still hard length of his manhood and softly said, "That's okay Phil,
there will be plenty of time to try again."

Philip's face lit up. "You mean we can do this again? How 'bout right now?"

Joann laughed and slowly stroked her hand up and down his cock.

"Don't think I'm going to let this fine piece of meat lay around idle. But right
now we had better get this place picked up before Mom and Dad get home."

Later that evening as the two of them sat in the Rec Room watching TV,
while their parents were watching in the family room, Philip couldn't keep his
hands off his sister. Joann lay on her side on the couch and Philip was seated on
the floor by her legs. He was wearing his usual at home attire of loose gym trunks
and a tee shirt. She had on a knee length nightshirt, but had left her panties off.

Philip had been rubbing and massaging her legs and was gradually moving
higher and higher, pushing her nightshirt up her thighs. Joann enjoyed the strong
rubbing and caresses and was gradually allowing her legs to drift further and
further apart giving Philip more room to massage. Her thighs spread further apart
as Philip's massaging hand worked higher and higher up her legs. His fingers
kneaded her muscles deep between her legs then slid out and onto her lower
stomach. Just his fingertips lightly caressed her mons, before carefully tracing
their way through her curly, silky pubic hair to find the top of her moistening
crack.

The television was forgotten as Joann pulled the bottom of her nightshirt up
over her flat stomach to more easily watch her brother's fingers playing with her
most private parts. Philip's eyes were glued to the Y of his sister's legs. He
couldn't believe that she was letting him play with her pussy. He slowly parted the
lips of her femaleness hunting for the way to get his finger up inside her.

Even though the erotic intimacy, not to mention the forbidden nature, was
causing Joann's tight little cunt to get very juicy and wet; Philip's probing fingers
were a bit impatient in their quest.

"Easy, little bro, - not so hard. Here, move your finger down a little, -- there --
gently, --ug, --oh yeah, now push in and up a little--slowly-- there." Joann sighed
as his finger slid up and into her welcoming hole. Philip goggled at the sight and
feel of his finger thrusting into his sister's cunt. Her legs splayed further apart as
he worked his hand in and out of her clinging cunt. The lips of her pussy swelled
and opened more and more until he could see at the top of her slit a little button of
flesh swelling up.

"Muff, may I stick another finger in?" asked Philip.

"OK, but slowly, it's tight, --and here-- put your other finger up here and rub
this very softly," breathed Joann as she took his little finger and moved it to rub on
her clit.

Philip now had two fingers plugged into his sister's soggy female hole and
another trying to play with her clitoris. His other hand was busy inside his loose
shorts rapidly stroking his hard cock. His manual manipulations were definitely
getting to Joann. Her breathing was getting faster. She pulled her nightshirt up still
further so she could squeeze her breasts. The juice from her sloppy slot ran down
the crack of her ass and over Philip's hand. As he worked his fingers in and out
of her, his thumb was pushed between her butt cheeks and the pussy slime made
everything down there very slippery.

After a couple minutes of increasingly heavy breathing on both parts, the
steady pressure of his hand pressing up and in brought Philip's thumb into direct
contact with Joann's puckered butt hole. She jumped slightly when he initially
started pressing on it and said, "Don't, not there--unh, unh, oh rub harder up
there," as she redirected his fingers to pull and tug on her clit more.

But Philip liked the idea of invading his sexy sister's ass, -- so after another
minute of pumping his fingers into her tight cunthole he slowly repositioned his
thumb, then shoved quickly-- forcing the end of his thumb through the tight
muscles of her anal opening and into the clasping channel beyond.

"Oh shit, --stop it Philip," screeched Joann trying to twist away from the rude
intrusion. But she was at a real disadvantage because her body wasn't
cooperating completely. It wanted to keep those pleasuring fingers in her warm
pussy. In fact, her twisting about actually forced her brother's thumb deeper into
her rear passage.

"Ow, -- stop it," Joann cried as she brought her hands down to try and pull
Philip's still plunging fingers out of her stretched openings. Their wild thrashings
pushed Joann's pelvis even harder onto her brother's hand and his palm rubbed
roughly over her mons with all his fingers buried deeply in her cunt, up her ass,
and massaging her clit. His thumb was still very uncomfortable in her butt, but all
this stimulation was overriding this with waves of passion.

Joann rolled off the couch landing on her butt-reaming brother, but he
managed to keep his grip between her legs. Just then they heard footfalls in the
hallway, then their father's voice called from the doorway, "All right, what are you
two up to now?"

Luckily the couch screened them from the doorway and Joann was able to
drag her nightshirt down over her heaving tits before the two of them sat up and
grinned sheepishly.

"Ah, Philip was tickling me again, Dad. And I guess we got a bit carried
away."

"Yeah, Dad," Philip added. "Sorry about the thudding about."

"Your mother and I are heading for bed; so please keep things to a 5 on the
Richter scale." their father smiled as he turned and left the room.

As soon as they were certain he was gone Joann pulled her top up and looked
down at her brother's fingers still plugged into her holes.

"I'm sorry if I hurt you much, Muff. I'm not sure what made me want to ream
out your poop chute. Does it hurt much? I'll pull out." Philip asked with a very
tender look on his face.

"Not just yet," smiled Joann. "It was just the suddenness. It doesn't feel too
bad now.

She gently rocked her loins back and forth getting used to the feel of having
both her pussy and ass filled at the same time. Reaching into her brother's shorts
she pulled out his still hard rod and started to stroke her hand up and down its
length. Than leaning forward, kissed her sibling full on the mouth and pushed her
tongue between his teeth.

At the state they were both in, only a minute of this torrid kissing and mutual
masturbation was enough to set them both off. Joann was moaning into Philip's
mouth and bouncing harder on his fucking fingers when he shot squirt after squirt
of semen onto his sister's belly and thighs. While his fingering caused her clinging
cunt and ass to spasm in orgasm.

After a couple minutes of tender cuddling and hugging they lovingly helped
each other clean up and then tiptoed up to their beds.

************
 
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