Help with Femdom Idea......

SEVERUSMAX

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.....since I don't usually do femdom (it's not generally to my taste), but had an idea that HAD to be femdom! It simply wouldn't work out any other way. It's a more twisted approach to the idea of a similar concept in "Door 2 Door". Major differences, however, in that the man is a closet submissive, I'm thinking a married man with no previous history of kink or cheating, but a secret voyeuristic fetish for dominant women. He has no business scruples (frankly, he's a crook), as he sells house-cleaning products door to door. He has built up a small financial empire on sales methods that stretch the boundaries of legality.

His marriage has gone stale, he has thought of cheating, but he doesn't have the balls to do so, until he meets Antonia, a Domme who has saved up enough money to retire early (she's 48). She simply takes charge of the meeting at some point (perhaps mid-way through it) and turns it into an interview with a possible slave, since she is looking for one to replace her ex (he left her recently, after deciding that he didn't want to be her slave after all).

She is NOT one of those Dommes who believe that all men should be subs and all women Dommes. She has no interest in making him submit to his wife. What he does in the privacy of his own house is not her concern, as she doesn't care about his marriage one way or the other. She doesn't really want him to live with her, as she has discovered that she likes her space since her divorce. She just wants to tie him up, dominate him, make him cum (after "earning" it, of course), and have him service her. She makes it quite clear to him that he is not her only slave, nor is she his girlfriend, though she is his Mistress in both senses of the word. Her attitude about his wife is that she had her chance to turn this guy on and missed it.

Any ideas for the man's name? I'm thinking Aaron. What about the wife's? Does this idea appeal to any of you? Should it ruin the marriage, be peripheral to it, or spice it up a bit? Is the wife cheating too? I'm curious as to your thoughts. This is almost terra incognita for me, as a genre.
 
I don't have any ideas for the names, but I wanted to tell you that it's a good story idea.

I think you have the right idea that the story should be more about the man's two very different relationships with the kinky stuff playing a secondary role.

I'm wondering why the man lets the Mistress take over his life. Is it because he can relax or becase he sees her as another challenge?
 
He finds himself yielding instinctively to her. At first, he is just co-operating to get a sale, but it reaches the point that he can't seem to resist obeying her. It's almost hypnotic to him.
 
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