Help with ending of my mom/sons story

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I'm 90% done with a store where three moms go on a spring break vacation with their sons. They end-up playing strip poker, which leads to some incestuos situations. First mom who ends up having sex with her son is a blonde, horny, bimbo. Second is more dominating, and also quite open about sex. The third mom, however, is the quietest and shyest of the three moms. I need help figuring out how best push her to have sex with her son. I'm thinking that the other two moms convince her to do it, but I don't love that too much (can your friends really convince you to have sex with your son?). Maybe she loses a serious game, and has to do that as part of the bet? Any other ideas?
 
She's having sex with the other two sons - who've seduced her - and suddenly her son joins in too?
 
Peer pressure, it does work.

Trickery. She thinks she about to have sex with one of the other boys but her son takes her instead.

Drunk. They get her drunk and she doesn't realize it's her son.

She see's the other mom/sons banging, and she wonders what it would be like.

She's competitive and doesn't want the other woman screwing him.

She's overprotective and doesn't want him to bang a bimbo and get an STD. She doesn't want a dominatrix to make him a sissy. She wants him to have a loving sexual encounter and who better than mom to teach him.

That's all I have for now.
 
She loses a bet, so she has to be blindfolded, tied up and fucked by one of the boys. She enjoys the sex immensely, but afterwards she discovers that it was her son.
 
Her son convinces her. "Mom, Timmy and Bobby both had sex with their moms. What do I get? Nothing! I'm so ashamed! Please, Mom, don't abandon me like that! Don't you love me as much as Timmy and Bobby's moms love them?"..... <crying eyes and quivering lips>...... "Oh, Honey, of COURSE I love you just as much.... come to Mommy....."
 
If she's shy and quiet then I think Carnevil9's approach is the best -- she's not as wild as the others but she wants to be a good mom and son feels left out and unhappy. She's tempted. Finally she gives in.
 
I believe that after they had been drinking and playing strip poker her son forces himself on her and make him dominate her and degrade her after she hesitates about it
 
I believe that after they had been drinking and playing strip poker her son forces himself on her and make him dominate her and degrade her after she hesitates about it

This could work. She's shy and quiet because she's a natural sub and she can't be aggressive like her friends with their sons. But when son gets aggressive and dominating -- something he has to work on because it's not his nature -- she can't resist him.
 
All six go on a small boat cruise. But a sudden storm comes up, the tiny ship gets tossed, and soon it is marooned on an uncharted island. All the other passengers and crew are killed or missing; only the three moms and three sons are left on the entire island.

There is plenty of food and fresh water so they don't have to fear for their lives. But as time goes on, they all start getting hornier and hornier. Their deteriorating clothing doesn't help matters. Eventually, they all have to give in and indulge their physical needs. And what better way to pair off than with the ones they have loved their entire lives?
 
All six go on a small boat cruise. But a sudden storm comes up, the tiny ship gets tossed, and soon it is marooned on an uncharted island. All the other passengers and crew are killed or missing; only the three moms and three sons are left on the entire island.

There is plenty of food and fresh water so they don't have to fear for their lives. But as time goes on, they all start getting hornier and hornier. Their deteriorating clothing doesn't help matters. Eventually, they all have to give in and indulge their physical needs. And what better way to pair off than with the ones they have loved their entire lives?

wouldn't it be more logical that they resist the incest option as long as possible? which means they do it mix and match first. Then it is tricky to get one to break the taboo, but once one goes that way, all follow.
 
What if it was supposed to go down as a son swap, and the quiet and shy mom decided to turn the lights out so she wouldn't see who she got, and accidental incest occurred between her and her son?
 
I'm 90% done with a store where three moms go on a spring break vacation with their sons. They end-up playing strip poker, which leads to some incestuos situations. First mom who ends up having sex with her son is a blonde, horny, bimbo. Second is more dominating, and also quite open about sex. The third mom, however, is the quietest and shyest of the three moms. I need help figuring out how best push her to have sex with her son. I'm thinking that the other two moms convince her to do it, but I don't love that too much (can your friends really convince you to have sex with your son?). Maybe she loses a serious game, and has to do that as part of the bet? Any other ideas?
she is soo horny and wants to.. so she calls me her trusted friend and little sister to get talked out of it.. and I tell her.. oooh fuck it is the best orgasms of your life when you watch his young rock hard cock slide beep into your body!!
 
wouldn't it be more logical that they resist the incest option as long as possible? which means they do it mix and match first. Then it is tricky to get one to break the taboo, but once one goes that way, all follow.

I could be happy deferring the incest to Chapter 2. Chapter 3 could be a gang-bang, or at least a couple of threesomes. Yeah, that's the ticket: a FMF threesome on one side of the island, and a MFM on the other side.
 
Well, I could lend you an idea I'm using in a story I'm working on. I had a similar problem like yours but I tried to take it another direction.
In my story, the son "mistakenly" takes a blue pill thinking its migraine medicine. He ends up with a hard dick. So Mom figures it out and wants to help. Son doesnt want to go to hospital because it's shaming. They are both forced into a corner where they have to have sex for the boner to disappear. Mom reluctantly agrees to it and even proposes it as a solution to the sexually naive son.
 
I could be happy deferring the incest to Chapter 2. Chapter 3 could be a gang-bang, or at least a couple of threesomes. Yeah, that's the ticket: a FMF threesome on one side of the island, and a MFM on the other side.

Where d you fit the scene where the sons want to watch the Moms in a lesbian three-way and the Moms insist the guys go first?
 
Where d you fit the scene where the sons want to watch the Moms in a lesbian three-way and the Moms insist the guys go first?

I actually wrote a very similar scene, but it was two wives and two husbands instead of moms and sons.
 
Mom and son

Asa mom/son fan of long standing (no pun intended) you might try an old faithful. Son gets up in the middle of the night, for whatever reason. Passes mom’s room sand hears a noise that suggests she is masturbating. He peeks in and sees what she is doing. There are a couple of options at this point. Maybe he takes note and goes back to bed to have a conversation with mom in the morning. Maybe he goes into her room and gets into a conversation with her which leads to sex. The possibilities are limited only by the author’s imagination.
 
The quiet mom is so embarrassed but says she will do it but not in front of everyone like the others. She says that her and her son will go into the bedroom (where she thinks she can play it off and not do it). Once in the room, the son takes off his sole article of clothing, his boxers, and she sees that he is larger than her husband. She tries to deny her feelings but gets hornier and hornier as her son lays on the bed. Since they were playing strip poker, she is also down to her underwear. The son begins to seduce her with a small massage or such, releasing her from her clothing. She eventually gives in to his advances.
 
She is shy so that means she won’t do anything in front of people. So let say she is the only one who stays clothed. She thinks everything is getting out of hand and decides to leave. Her son decides to walk his mom back to her room then comeback to the party and bang his friends mom. When he goes to put his clothes on the others says that’s against the rules. Once you lose you have to remain naked all night and lock up his clothes. The son is worried about his mom and doesn’t want her to go alone and decides to go naked. Why not it’s spring break let’s get nuts.

When they get back to the room mom is finally getting a good look at her rock hard son. She was too shy to look at him before with everyone there. She tells him how she hasn’t seen him naked since he was little and how much he has “grown”. As they talk about what just happened she becomes less shy because after all it’s her baby boy but at the same time shes horny from playing strip poker. She also can’t believe how “big” he’s gotten. His father sure doesn’t compare. Eventually they get down to business.
 
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She's shy, but did agree to play strip poker? Whatever made her agree to that, can there be a natural progression along that line?
Drunk? Perhaps drinking is the answer to above? Again, natural progression. Personally, I don't like booze as an excuse, I'd rather see her give in to desire or domination with her wits at least somewhat still about her.
You say there have already been incestuous situations. during the game? And first mom does screw her son? At the game, in front of the others or with their knowledge?
How about a poker skill angle? Shy mom and son have real skills (maybe learned from his dad). And they've been dominating the game, still have clothes, while they've stripped the others down. When the others lost their clothes they bet actions, thus the other mothers and their sons.
What's the next bet? Son makes the other mom's blow him, etc?
Seeing the women fuck their own sons, and then hers, is eating away her restraint. Finally she has one of the other boys perform an act on her.
Ultimately the big showdown has shy mom and son all-in; clothes and sex on the line. One of them shows 4 of a kind, the other a straight flush - Monster vs. Monster and the winner takes it all.
Finally the son
 
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