Help With College Essay

[internalbait23]

Hi, I was wondering if some Literoritca members can take a quick break and help me correct my college essay. I have not worked on the introduction but finished the bodies. I'm not much of a good writer so you can expect a lot of errors. In return, I will make a small donation to Literotica if signifact changes are made.

Access the essay here:
http://123.writeboard.com/ae9db19a40d7daeb5

You’ll also need this password:
computer

 

[kendo1]

I wonder what happens if I open this file and put in the password?
BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.

Oh fuck!