Help with a story

[TwiztedClown]

I remember seeing a thread about someone saying that they would help with grammar and stuff like that but i cant seem to find it..anyways...i was wondering if anyone would help me with the story "Visit to a Porn Shop", there are alot of errors on the threads like wrong pov and just bad grammar. I would do it but I'm not that good with grammar.

 

[amalgam]

If you want to make me sub-editor and assign me a thread to go through, I can help.

 

[TwiztedClown]

Well more than half of them are screwed up But ill make u sub right now, how u do that again?

 

[amalgam]

By thread, I mean a pathway. Um, lemme add something to the story and then you can update my privileges.

 

[amalgam]

If you wanted me to help you, you haven't told me how.