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Jack4rp

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Hello everyone,

I am in the middle of a role play with a woman and we come to you with a request: Decide, for us, which chapter we go with. Instead of continuing back and forth, we've BOTH written the next chapter and we want YOU to vote which chapter we continue off of next. VOTING ENDS SATURDAY!

So please, read the summary of our story below, and then read both chapters please before making your choice. Also, any reactions you'd like to post about either, or both stories, are welcome and encouraged.

I hope everyone enjoys. :)

Jack's Chapter

Julie's Chapter

Summary:

This is a role playing session based at a wedding, involving mainly two people, Julie and Jack, but with so much more going on. Julie is the bride's cousin and she's been recruited by the bride's mother, to help repair a rift between the two families, to be a bridesmaid despite the fact that no one, including Julie, wants her to be one.

Because of this, Julie had been harrassed, insulted, propositioned and basically treated like crap throughout the reception by everyone - expect one man, Jack, who works for the hotel and helped to handle the wedding.

A smile and a flirt by Jack, returned by Julie, and the two are off - finding out they both enjoy games and dares, the two of them set out to turn a boring wedding to a fun game of surprises.

After many dares and bets, Julie and Jack end up at the pool, where Julie has Jack strip and go for a swim. It's at this point Steve, the best man, and two groomsmen, decided to pay Julie a visit thinking she's alone, to make her uncomfortable.

The tables are turned, however, when Jack gets out of the pool and walked to Julie's side. Steve sensed that, even if he was willing to go further, the two groosmen weren't and backed out.

Thinking the war had been won, although Julie knowing better, Jack decided to cash in on of his dares and has Julie take a skinny dip into the pool. Jack received a phone call - from his boss - and deciding to up the anty, grabbed Julie's dress and purse, leaving her naked in the pool area for half an hour.

As Jack left Steve, who had doubled back and found a maintain room overlooking the pool area, heads back down and waited by the pool entrance as Mike - his best friend and a groomsmen - kept an eye on Jack, stealing Julie's dress and purse from where Jack hidden them. With Julie's items secured in their room safe, they both decided to pay Julie a visit.

As the time ticked away before Jack would return, he ran into a cute bridesmaid - Alyssa - who took a liking to him. Dancing with her and flirting, Jack decided this was his night and charmed her into giving him her panties. Seeing the clock is nearing 12, the half an hour almost up, Jack decied to head back and return Julie's things.

While Jack is away, Julie hid in the suana while Steve and Mike entered the darkened pool and searched for her. Julie's heart sunk as she realized who was out there and that whatever they have planned can't be good at all.

Julie took things into her own hands and with their backs are turned, she made her move and tried sneaking out, with a tiny white towel clutched to her chest, and is caught before she's able to exit - the flash of Steve's camera goes off taking a picture of her naked behind and back.

Spinning around, Julie held the towel fast against herself as the two of them took pictures, mocking and insulting her, and out of the corner of her eye she saw Jack running towards the pool area, concerned.

As Jack opened the door and stepped into, Mike stepped from the shadows and slugged him right in the gut, sent him to the ground, and Mike held him there. With Jack, her only hope, down and out Steve and Mike did whatever they pleased, took their time, taking photos and all.

Julie felt helpless, and would do almost anything to get out of this situation, and that's when the agreement was struct: Julie would agree to any one photo, and Steve would return her things to her.

As Steve explained the most humilating photo possible and Julie realized she had no choice anymore, either she did it or they would take far more than one photo. So she took a deep breath and prepared herself - unaware she had a guardian angel of sorts above.

Alyssa had been recruited by Steve, who she had dated in college and still found attractive despite the fact he treated her like crap, to keep an eye on Jack and away from the pool. So when Jack left her there in the ball room,
she had followed him and curious to what was going on she found the same maintain room Steve had used and watched below as Steve ordered Julie into the same position he done with her while in college.

Finally realizing who Steve truely was, and even though she disliked Julie, Alyssa called the hotel security to the pool area. Getting word that security was coming, Steve and Mike made a break for it but not before letting Julie know how close that bullet had come, and that if Jack tried anything, he'd be fired so fast he'd have no idea what hit him.

With them gone, security came, followed by Alyssa, and Julie went to hide once again in the sauna. She looked out again through the glass window and is surprised to see Alyssa kiss Jack, and the two security guards (Tim and Dave) teased Jack as he made up a story about slipping and smacking his head. Jack's head pounding and thoughts unclear, his two 'friends' escorted him back to Aylssa's room where she takes advantage of the situation and decided to purge Steve from her system - not that Jack didn't enjoy the ride plenty.

After waking a few minutes later, Jack started feeling guilty and confessed to Alyssa how he was the one to put Julie in that situation. Finding out Alyssa shared his thoughts on Steve, they both decide to search for Julie back at the pool.

However, with everyone gone again, Julie decided that she can only count on herself to get out of this mess. The tiny towel clutched to her chest, she makes her way into the hotel only to be bowled over by the security guards, Tim and Dave.

As Julie laid on her back and stared up at them, Steve watched, hidden in a doorway, after having yet again doubled back.
 
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