help... rejected

[babypeach]

Hi, I've been rejected w/ a story 2 times now. It's a lesbian story. I rewrote it the first time. My character's dialog needed help. I wasn't starting new paragraph's w/ new speakers. Now it's my spelling. I proofread and I only found 3 mistakes in spelling but I want to make sure. This would/will be my first story. Can anyone help?

 

[haruka]

I can help out if you like

I can certainly help you with editing your story.
Do you also want a good, honest critique? If not, make sure to tell me.

PM me about it.

Take care

 

[Chicklet]

re: Spelling

Hey Peachy, baby...

For spelling sometimes the simplest way to find spelling errors is to run it through a spell check. Do you have MSWord or something that has spell check? When I edit a story, the first thing I see is all my little underlined mistakes...

As for proofreading your own story, it can be tough, since you're the one that wrote it in the first place. I find it next to impossible to find my own mistakes.

If you're still looking for help, why don't you go ahead and PM me your story, or click on the story link underneath my post and send it to me in feedback form. Just be sure to label the e-mail OR the PM with what's inside so I don't think I'm losing my mind = )

You'll get it fixed and submitted one way or another, I promise.

-Chicklet

 

[peachykeen]

yay, another peachy

If you haven't already gotten some good help, let me know, I'll be pleased to assist.