Help please with cuck story

[Mrswitch]

Is there anyone willing to edit my story. It contains cuckolding and is 4500 words. I welcome content suggestions but mainly need help with copy. Thanks so much for your help.

 

[nakdsub]

One suggestion...

When you submit it, put it in Fetish, not Loving Wives.

 

[PennLady]

You could try that but it might get put in LW anyway. Not sure, but it's a possibility.

 

[lovecraft68]

I think its about 80/20 that it gets put in LW, cuckold is not necessarily lumped in with fetish on lit.

 

[palisa]

Mrswitch, if you're puzzled by the direction of this thread, the comments were made because there's an active contingent of presumably macho-macho guys who prowl the loving wives category giving the lowest possible score and making nasty comments because they're offended by the idea of a cheating wife.

 

[tanda9876]

Happy to have a go

If you ontact me I'm happy to have a look.

 

[Mrswitch]

Thanks palisa

I was wondering what some of the comments had to do with my question. Lol I guess some people are a little threatened by there own curiosity.

 

[Confi]

I'm happy to read it through if you'd like.

 

[Mrswitch]

tanda9876

you have no contact information listed so I can't contact you.

 

[Himself128]

When you submit it, put it in Fetish, not Loving Wives.

Am I the only one who appreciates nakdsub's sarcasm?

 

[sr71plt]

Am I the only one who appreciates nakdsub's sarcasm?

It's not that I don't appreciate nakdsub's sarcasm, but I missed what it was in this case. Can you clarify so we all can have a good "appreciate"?

 

[Himself128]

It's not that I don't appreciate nakdsub's sarcasm, but I missed what it was in this case. Can you clarify so we all can have a good "appreciate"?

He suggested she put it under the fetish rather than loving wife category. Cuckolding does not fall into the characteristics that the local parson or marriage therapist would promote for a successful marriage.

The simplicity of the suggestion made it sound real but it sure tickled my sarcastic fancy.

 

[sr71plt]

Well, OK, but what you probably don't understand is that the website puts cuckold stories under the Loving Wives category here. So, I see a couple of miscues here in relation to how the website actually categorizes stories.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

If you ontact me I'm happy to have a look.

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

tanda9876
you have no contact information listed so I can't contact you.

Actually tanda9876 can be contacted via the main site at http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=810450&page=contact if necessary.