Help needed

[noobdude]

I have written my first literotica story and was running it by a volunteer editor and she said I should get someone with experience to look at it. I am not looking for a line by line edit of my story, just a general feedback of what works and what doesn't.

It's about a guy who's wife starts to feminize him by having him crossdress.

Since I have no experience in this, and neither does my editor, I am looking for someone willing to give my piece a read and tell me what I need to fix (if possible) and what I need to scrap and what works.


Thanks in advance.

 

[Kiera_Nightgal]

I have written my first literotica story and was running it by a volunteer editor and she said I should get someone with experience to look at it. I am not looking for a line by line edit of my story, just a general feedback of what works and what doesn't.

It's about a guy who's wife starts to feminize him by having him crossdress.

Since I have no experience in this, and neither does my editor, I am looking for someone willing to give my piece a read and tell me what I need to fix (if possible) and what I need to scrap and what works.


Thanks in advance.

Not super experienced but as this is a fantasy I be glad to read for selfish reasons

 

[teddie_grl]

Not super experienced but as this is a fantasy I be glad to read for selfish reasons

Send it to Kiera and I, we will collaborate and get back to ya